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| Anthony Wolfie Cruger 2006-12-20 ch 1,  | abuseHey either way doesn't bother me, but if you don't continue then may I follow up with it? Because I like it. |
| Yoda's Padawan 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! THAT WAS SO GOOD! A+ ON THE FLUFF ACTION! :D:D:D MORE SOON PLEASE!! |
| AdrianTepes001 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseCute story but you need to work on the dialouge for both characters. |
| Zen'Aku Lati 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm glad someone wrote this pairing, but I have to say that your Doggie seems a bit out of character... |
| My brain just died! 2005-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh god! there is no possible way these two can kiss. I hate this pairing, Doggie and Kat are best friends and I dunno why people keep pairing them up. God, I think my brain just died >_ |
| StarTraveler 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! Kat/Cruger is my fav pairing |
| Jillie chan 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI must say that the Commander was acting more like Jack than himself. See you soon. |
| chaotic pink chocobo 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseKAWAII! er, sorry. to many anime fics. Anyways this story is so CUTE! can I add it to my C2? PLEASE! |