Amazing story! The only word I can think to describe it is Perfect. Good job! =D

Freaky! Hahah!

I'm not sure whether or not I've read Overload, but I've read some Static-gone-bad fics before. This was awesome though; my favorite part was how you took Sharon and used her to show *multiple* characters' reactions to Virgil slowly going powermad.

Excellent piece. Wonderful job conveying emotions, and keeping everyone in character. Kudos.

whoa, creepy, but totally awesome! I love all of your Static Shock fics and I hope you're able to continue Overload soon. It's getting hard to find non slash stories and yours is amazing. I love the idea of a Richie/Madelyn pairing.

I liked it. Very well written, very scary.
There were a few minor wording or spelling issues.
I think you would get more reviews if you changed the summary. Summaries are everything. I was actually avoiding yours because the summary gave me the impression that Virgil was jelously chasing off Sharon's boyfriends or something. They are all technically "men in Sharon's life" but that phrase refers specifically to boyfriends in most contexts.
I'll go read overload.

Absolutely LOVED IT!

Jeez...that was AWESOME!