You write Jyou's father very well ^_^. You make it possible to see both Jyou's perspective and his fathers, which is something that I haven't found much of on ff.net. Poor Jyou!

Ooooh!! How delightfully intense... This is a very unique fic! I really like how you wrote Kido-san, what a complete arse. n_n

Though you can't tell - unless you're far closer to computers than the average person - I'm currently on my knees, worshipping. The personality you created for Jyou's father fit so absolutely perfectly I would swear it was canon, and I could *see* the conversation happening.

O.o Eek...I feel a sorta kinda semblence of pity for Jyou's father now...Very well-written!

Well-done. You portrayed the relationship between Jyou and his father really well.

Waaai! Rahn-san! I'm very very happy to see this published! (and I'm sorry I haven't talked to you lately...I've been kinda hiding out from my in-box. BUT, I'm determined to finish up all the emails I owe THIS weekend!!) I'm pleased as punch that you wrote this little bit to illustrate the relationship between Jyou and his father! It cleared up a lot of questions I had concerning their relationship in your universe!! Great job~!

Ah... yes.. go Jyou go!!! *laughs in Mr. Kido's face* MWAHAHAHAHA! Oy, I love these types of fics! That was a really nice one too!

You go, Jyou! Stand up to the old man! Nice ficcie, Rahn-san. I especially liked the little bit at the end with Jyou's dad reflecting on his kids. We need more fics about the Kido family, y'know that? Thanks for filling some of that niche. ;)

*glomps fic* Eiee! You know I love this, Rahn-san!! I still love the ~click~ and the fact that you told the story in third person. I still think that just makes Jyou's father seems so business-like and impersonal. *cheers for Jyou* I can't help it, I love this fic!! Maybe it's cause I know how hard it is to let a parent down and tell them that the dream that they had for you wasn't necessarily the one that you had for you...or maybe it's just cause you wrote it awesome. ^-^*bounces happily* I just love it!

As I've said over the IM, ~great~ characterisation of Jyou's father! It's not something you see much of in he fics... He's usually a behind-the-scenes character. I also liked the formality of it all. Very well done! Frankly, m'dear, you rock. o.o