Great story! You are a very talented writer. I see it's been eight years since this was posted...I wish there was more to read...

I like it..I'll have to read the book.

I liked the fanfic. I particularly liked the idea of an elven mafia. It is something that has never been presented to me before. The idea is a very good spring board for other stories. I hope there are more chapters to come because I thoroughly enjoyed these few.

Thank you.

Luv it! Keep on writing!

Hey next chapter!

i want more!

Very good.

that was cool good job it alot

Wow... well first, major first, change the rating. This is not a PG-13 story. I have never read the book, but the story is definitely interesting. You're not only creative but talented as well. Keep up the good work.

Yeeee! So good to see you on ! ::huggles:: I remember reading this story way back when! It's still awfully good; lovely imagery. Might wanna up the rating though... ::points to the 'G':: LOL I don't think anything about Ravenloft is G. Anyways. Keep posting stuff! Love ya, baby!