Two words. Defiantly and Gilmour. Both are mispelled lol. They should be definetly and Gilmore. Sorry that was bugging me. The one problem I had was you repeated a lot of stuff like, he was happy, and then you said it again for the same reason in the next sentence.

Now the good stuff, I usually HATE the Pre-Washington fics, but this one was good. it's going on my favorites!

~MG~

Original title, decent story, bad spelling. And she has BLUE eyes! Her last name is spelled "Gilmore". Don't forget to make sure the first letter of names are capitals. And use spellcheck!