   yumi2482 2008-08-19 . chapter 1so sad |
 Rosalind du Coudray 2008-07-13 . chapter 1WOW! That story was really sad :'(. I'd like to think that Hiroki lives... |
 Indigo Spirit 2006-10-04 . chapter 1Lovely story, very beautiful. |
 Yumi's Jade Katana 2006-08-07 . chapter 1beautiful.
~*((JADE))*~ |
 MooMoo 2006-07-13 . chapter 1Wow that was very sad! |
 breakdown156 2006-03-18 . chapter 1That was really sad but brought to people together. |
| YumiSplash 2006-03-02 . chapter 1 "crys" so sad! |
 Amaherst 2006-02-28 . chapter 1I say through Ulrich's love for Yumi and her family, he gethered the strength to kill all the monsters and get Aelita to the tower safely and Hiroki survives. Then 5 years later Ulrich and Yumi get married!! |
| Courtnet Milius 2006-02-12 . chapter 1 That story was cool |
 Japanese-Fanatic 2006-02-06 . chapter 1AWESOME! Please write more soon!! This is really good!! |
| Cassie 2006-02-02 . chapter 1 PLEASE write more! I LOVE it it is sad but i LOVE it! PLEASE write another chapter you could tell if Hiroki lives or dies and what happens on lyoko and all that good stuff! PLEASE write more! |
| purplelover 2006-01-24 . chapter 1 please continue! I think it could be a great story! :) |
| beth 2006-01-21 . chapter 1 (sniff) (sniff)that was so sad i was hoping you would finish but i chose that aelita got to the tower safly and fight after yumi whispered "i love you" a launch to return to the past saved her brother. but good job it made me sad. |
| 1stRainbowRose 2006-01-10 . chapter 1 Well, you had better have a part two, and he had better better live. Please? |
| Yumi 2006-01-02 . chapter 1 survive please. |
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