Good chapter!! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK

Good chapter! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK

Good chapter! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK

Good chapter! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK

Good start! I like it! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK

Bravo. Great story, don't sweat small grammar mistakes, I know College graduates that still make mistakes worse than that. You are a great author, perfeito, muito bem senhor.

Hey man, great chapter, but you've got the story in the wrong section. This one goes in the Sailor Moon section, not the Sailor Moon/Ranma story. How can it be chapter 4 when it's only chapter 2?

Anyway, I loved it and I wonder how Benji's going to take being used like that as well as Haruka. It won't end well, that's for sure!

Uhh...can you say "character perfect to the point of stupidity"? Not only that, there are tons of grammar mistakes. Why would people try to get ON THE high school/college? Unless you mean they applied for High School/College. Actually, I notice you use 'on' incorrectly a lot. The word you're looking for is "in".

Well this will get intersting...ness...ly...esque...