 Sparks the Cheese Loving Wolf 2009-05-06 . chapter 1Nice, short but nice, it's what you might call a minimalist effect; making a great impression with the slightest of things, great.
I've run out of cheeses I know the names of so I'm just going straight to the last bit. My all time favourite; STINKING BISHOP! |
 Bureizu za Vampire 2009-02-15 . chapter 1This is really good. The lyrics are rather clever. Great work! |
 Azure Teriques 2007-08-25 . chapter 1A little short, but good.^^ |
 Groovy Dudette 2006-12-17 . chapter 1 I know I reviewed this already but I just have to say how supised I am that only 3 of us have reviewed this. I think this incredibly well written. It is very origonal and I LOVE how you had both of them thinking almost the exact same thing but for completly different reasons.
I think my favorite stanza is this:
Can’t you see I want to let go?
Can’t you see I want it all to end?
Can’t you see it, don’t you know?
Just reach out and take my hand...
Theres just somethihg very profound in how you worded that. I can picture perfectly which one of them is talking (shadow 1st couple lines, Sonic last 2 lines) and...wow. It's so neat.
Keep up the good work. This is one of my fav sonic one shots ^^ |
 Groovy Dudette 2005-12-26 . chapter 1I loved that! That was very thought out and very nicely written. It needs another chapter though ;)
I loved how it was in BOTH of their POVs. Good job and keep up the good work! *adds to favs* |
 KazeKiryoku 2005-11-30 . chapter 1It's a bit short, but that's ok. It's still really good. |
 RyukoVulpix 2005-11-26 . chapter 1(sigh) So short, but so perfect. A case where extra words would have taken away from the meaning. Excellent job.
As much as I disliked SA2's ending because of Shadow's supposed death, I have to admit that it was one of the better video game endings out there. We can only imagine what happened out there in space, with no other witness besides one who doesn't dwell on the past.
(cough) I'm thinking too deeply again. :D Great job, keep up the good work! |