Pretty! Sad! Love it!

Which one is JC? Is he ever here yet? Is this before his time?

Little confusing as to who, exactly, the Creeper is.

I understand he is of a species of demons,
and that's actually very interesting.

Then again, the Creeper doesn't HAVE to be the main character, I suppose.

Good write, keep it up.

I rather liked this story. Finally, someone gives the Creeper a good backstory. YAY! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Ciao! ^_^

haha. like the story, morly like what u write at the end. good names. creative. keep it up!

Pretty good story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.