nice

Aww this story is so sweet, I love it! An unusual pairing but I still like it. There aren't enough stories for these two...:( please update soon, if you need ideas I'm happy to help :)

Hm...I liked it but Touru seemed a little OOC...

not as kawaii! but its still cute! love it! ja ne!

aww kawaii! ja ne! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

aww kawaii! ja ne! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

I Love It!

Don't stop now!

CONTINUE!

so you want ideas

1. yuki remembers

2. akito finds out that they're together

3. hana finds out what's going on and she zaps akito and/or megumi curses akito

4. yuki falls in love with hana

5. hatori's mind erasal fails and everyone remembers yuki, yuki's frinds from when he was a kid, momiji's mom, and kana. this will give lots of stuff happening not only between aya and tohru but with everyone else as well.

Hi! I really hope u come back and write more.. it is hard to find a Tohru X Ayame fanfic and i really like Ayame and the possible pairing!

please start over and do a better story line. this is so mushy mushy. tohru isn't like that, she's empty headed, that is her attraction, not miss i'm mushy mushy. if you want to do a romance then do it the right way.

-Flamer

this is good so far, but why was tohru sent away? what happened to yuki? could you tell some more of the back story, maybe in flashbacks?

that was a really cutte story and i think that you should contnue with the story even if it turns out to only be another chapter.

oh of course! continue... i started to like yuki AND ayame.. i am ashamed of myself! lol, not really.

Good job, its good. Not as good as some as your other work, but good still.

PLEASE CONTINUE! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE! I DON'T CARE IF OTHERS DON'T LIKE IT, JUST UPDATE IT FOR ME! Thanx!

Silver Wolf Pup