   Serenity Maxwell 2008-05-18 . chapter 18nice ending and a great transition to what comes next. great job. |
 Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-05-16 . chapter 18very wicked way to end the story |
 Taeniaea 2008-05-16 . chapter 18Great Story!! |
| Serenity Maxwell 2008-04-24 . chapter 17 nice work, i hope serena did find her first. |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-04-24 . chapter 17 very wicked chapter |
| Taeniaea 2008-04-24 . chapter 17 Great Story!! |
| Neviegirl 2008-04-24 . chapter 17 That God that something opened there eyes. I just hope that Serena can sence that they are good again and needs her help. |
| Serenity Maxwell 2008-04-13 . chapter 16 great chapter, kinda sad, but i know you won;t leave her dead. :) |
| Taeniaea 2008-04-12 . chapter 16 Great Chapter!! |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-04-12 . chapter 16 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-04-08 . chapter 15 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-04-08 . chapter 14 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-04-08 . chapter 13 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-04-08 . chapter 12 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-04-08 . chapter 11 very wicked chapter |
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