Awesome.

this story is great and it explains sooooooo much about willy's behavior towards other people!

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Not usually my type of story, but a quick glance at your reviews prodded me into reading most of this.

A very unique and different take on why Wonka closed his factory.

Personally, my favorite part was the very last line of this fanfic: I don't know why-it just worked :P

Wow, very psychologically moving. Reading about such a pure human treated in that way ... very thought provoking. (Psychology major. LOL That's how I work) But I did greatly enjoy this. All your stories seem interesting. Can't wait to read more.

I like dark . Congrats, I wasn't sure I'd like it...

Very creepy but well written. I commend you for your great story! I like the explanations and the end.

what a nice nice sorry ! can u write more ?

OH MY! You are amazing, it's so great! This (and the other stories of your's) are the some of the niftyist Willy Wonka stories there are! You sure know how to put a twist on things, don't you? This sure was a wonderful story!

Damn! I can exhale now... That is, indeed, quite a compelling story. Quite a different perspective on Mr. Wonka's closing of the factory. I wanted to just wrap my arms around Willy Wonka and just comfort him! Even though my own stories, which I post on the AFF website, are PWP numbers that deal with "gettin' down and dirty" with the candyman, this story tugged at my heartstrings. (Sh! Don't tell anybody that this dirty ol' lady had a soft streak...)

Excellent story!

Wow, that was certainly a change from TMYH. It was quite...angsty. I loved it. *existentializes* Hey, you made me all existential.

Holy s*t! That was dark! I kind of love these dark stories though and I think by far, this has been my favorite.

The last sentence of this story had me hold my breath. Good thing Charlie's a good boy.

Wow! A short yet powerful and moving story! I really liked it. It made me feel even more sympathy for Wonka and his protective nature regarding his factory and recipies!

8D. : that is my face right there

you posted it! whoo! now lots more peoples can read how freakishly wonderful your writing is.