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AlterEgoErin
2008-08-01
ch 17,
abuseWow. That's all I can say. Just...wow. That was one hell of an ending. I didn't see that coming. Like at all. I could say I didn't like how it wasn't an official "happy" ending. But to be honest. It was simply... amazing. It was just sweet. Really really sweet.
"Let's just say... I'm your angel."- I merely smiled :)
"I fell in love with an angel, not with a demon."- this single line truely explained why she did it.
I couldn't have asked for a better ending. Even if its not happy happy. But its... tranquil. It sure is a unique one that I have yet come across.
So both haruka and michiru had a good and evil side to them, huh?
:)
God! This ending was just brilliant! I can't find the words to describe it. >_<

And sorry I didnt review the other chapters. To be honest. I wasn't even planning to review at all (sorry again ^^'). But this last chapter was so marvelous, that I simply couldn't refuse to tell you how amazing it is.

And again.
Gorgeous ending.
:)

Bravo.
krugern
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story. The ending still makes my cry everytime I read it.
Vanessa Riverton
2008-03-03
ch 17,
abuseWow. I just read this entire breathtaking story.

The ending completely made me cry. No eternal love for Haruka and Michiru. Haruka will never know. God it really made me sad but it was such a beautiful story.

I loved it.
Thepillows93
2007-08-10
ch 17,
abusewow...i seem to find a pattern in ur writing...or wait...maybe is not u...idk i been reading too many h/m fics today o.o...but michiru is always the one who dies...LOL idk, but it just seemed to me that maybe it's time Haruka dies for Michiru! ne? LOL JK it would be better if neither died >< but i still enjoyed this story, love is...hard :) they really loved each other.
peach83
2007-06-06
ch 17,
abusei couldnt even describe how much i love this story... i had to cry... they really loved each other! this has been a wonderful journey... thank you for sharing...
OxMiss PeachesXo
2007-05-28
ch 17,
abuseokee i am a bit confused as what had happened... i dont understand the end at all... michiru made huruka a child again? for what reason. i am lost... eh. :\
ShoujoGirl
2007-05-27
ch 17,
abuseI've been reading Within These Belts and I had to read your previous fic. Well done!
SayurixMion
2006-12-23
ch 1,
abusewow this was an amazing story! I loved the plot and you got me hooked that I couldn't stop reading till I finished it ^__^ You did a great job and you're writing was very very impressive :)Though the ending was sad and I (well half) didn't wish for it to end that way, I loved your story ^__^ Thanks so much for writing such an amazing work for me to read before Christmas ^__^
angel prototype
2006-11-13
ch 17,
abuseholy...crap...THAT WAS GREAT! i cant think of anything else to say..i mean that was just...amazing. very well written and i love that michiru was the demon :P the ending was kinda sad...that poor little ruka had to see her die like that. but great nonetheless!!
Sad But Working Bunny
2006-07-20
ch 17,
abuseI loved your story it took me long to read but i loved it!!
Nilla
2006-07-04
ch 17, anon.
abuseAw, the ending was so sad! I read this whole fic today. You might want to go back through it and check for grammatical errors, as I noticed more and more as I read on. However, you made up for it with this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially the first love scene. It was beautiful and hot and sad at the same time. I'll definitely be reading your other fics!
Some Other Name
2006-06-28
ch 17,
abuse*cries* This was such an awsome story. *sniffles* The ending was so happy-ish sad! You're such a good author, you're one of those guys who make me think 'Why don't you just change the names of the characters and turn this into a real published book with pictures or something?' Anyways, great job!
SpaceWyvern
2006-06-12
ch 17,
abuseA great story, even though the ending is sad. Keep up the good work, you did a great job.

One thing, though. "Ka" in Japanese is actually how they pronounce the questionmark. So, technically, you didn't -need- to put a questionmark after "ka" when Haruka was talking, but a lot of people probably don't know "ka" is "questionmark". I've never put a questionmark in with a Japanese sentance that had ka at the end, but that's just me. No need to take it out, though, just pointing something out for future reference. It didn't take away from the story, so I wouldn't worry about it.

-Raevin
hunter007
2006-06-07
ch 17, anon.
abusewow...that was indeed unexpected but I like it...you are just an amazing writer and I hope this is not the last H&M fic written by you...thank you for sharing your imaginations with us!
Haruka-Michiru
2006-06-05
ch 17,
abuse*cries* That was so sad!! After all Haruka went through to be with her? I can see why Michiru would be upset though... Even if it was her fault to begin with... *cough* But yes. You can't always expect a happy ending, so congratulations on finishing you story! I loved it.
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