This is the best Willabeth fic I've read seriously the best. I read the uncut version and I loved it. It was beautfully written as you read it you could really feel the love Will has for Elizabeth made my eyes water a little towards the end. Amazing job!

Great story. Very touching:D

Weird... I'm beginning to wonder what you do in your spare time. although Wiliz is a lunatic compared to you

This is a sweet story. Touching.

Lovely.. so lovely

I've rarely met a story so touching! This is definately something that I'm glad you shared. Your writing is a mouth-gaping talent, in my opinion, and please never let it fade away. Great work!
-Kat O' Nine Tails

I think you should have Elizabeth's POV in the same situation

This is a beautiful little story, filled with so much emotion and passion. Simply gorgeous:)

How do you write this stuff, you genius?

You *points to you* complete me *points to self*

*makes heart with fingers*

-williz

OMG Mel! You are the best erotica author like EVER! Seriously! You should write a book. Honestly. I'd buy it! As would like... everybody!
That was so good and cute and hot! Now I shall go and check out the explict one. wooh!
luv ya
x-emma-o

Awe! Yeah, and now I need a cold shower.

Yowtch! Thar is all I have to say about this passion, and to put it in Will's Point Of View is delightful, to say the least.

MELLEH! Another great fluffy story, and I like to think it's all for me after I begged you to write another. I can't wait to read the uncut version, this should be good. Thanks so much for another great story, this has definitly made my day. Love ya!