Robi: Wow! Catene is a dragon! Awesome!
Trissa: She's pretty small for a dragon. And grey, how odd.
Robi: She's not a Pernese dragon, silly.
Trissa: I know that. Update soon!

~Robika and Tristith

I knew it! Oh my god. They're DRAGONS! OMGOMG!

Great chapter.

Update soon please!

~EJ Amber

Hm... can I assume this is Ninth Pass Pern or is it one of the earlier times? That's really something important to the story. And which Weyr are they at? Fort? Telgar? Benden? If it's Benden, has he met F'lar and Lessa yet? That would have to be the pair currently Weyrleaders, so was F'lar the Weyrleader he wanted to speak to? Or is it another Weyr? High Reaches, maybe? Or Ista? Could it be Igen? Will you even tell us??

But still, great two chapters, loved it! Update soon!

~Amber

This is very interesting not entirely sure where theyre from but then I'll have to keep reading

Robi: Poor Jesece! All this slander behind her back!

Trissa: She couldn't have been that bad of a person if she Impressed a queen.

Robi: I hope we'll get to know her a little better as the story progresses. Good chapter! Update soon!

~Robika and Tristith

And the Project members/new Dragonriders start to wonder what their dragons will be like. Keep it up I like it very much. :)

Well, it's a pretty good chapter... perhaps you can actually get to the *plot* next? This is a little slow... I think it might be better if you speed it up slightly. Other than that, though, AWESOME CHAPTER! Update soon!

Robi: A few spelling errors, but otherwise a great chapter!

Trissa: Robi thought too loud at first, too. She was always singing songs in her head.

Robi: Trissa! We're here to talk about the chapter, not us!

Trissa: Okay, okay... B'riin doesn't like meat?! He just paired himself up with a carnivore. He better get used to it.

Robi: Well I'm excited to hear about this project and read about weyrling lessons. Trissa practically doubled in size after her first night. I wonder what will happen to these new dragonets.

Trissa: Yes, so update soon!

~Robika and Tristith

I like the new chapter. I keep wondering about this porject though. I hope you reveal it soon. :)

Robi: Ooh! These people are mysterious! Update soon, I like this fic!
Trissa: Those two poor hatchlings didn't hatch...
Robi: Oh, Trissa, don't fret so! Just update soon, mmkai?

~Robika and Tristith

Hey nice fic. I wonder what the project you keep talking about is. Anyways I like your style, and can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Great story, update soon! But, you've spelled some stuff wrong. Not to sound rude, but the beta-reader is your friend, dude!

Here's what you've spelled wrong, along with how you'd spell it correctly.

was = in this context, you mean "were"

to = you wrote "that is what I thought to" and in this case it should be "that's what I thought, too"

Itra = you spelled that right, but in the context of "he Impressed a brown Itra" you are actually saying that instead of a DRAGON being Impressed, it was an ITRA. What you should have said is "he Impressed a brown, Itra" especially since I don't think Itras are a species on Pern... unless I'm mistaken, it's your character.

eighter = it should be either. Not eighter. Eighter isn't a word. Either is what it should have been. If you'd like me as a beta, I'll do it, but PLEASE IF YOU DON'T HAVE A BETA, PLEASE IN THE NAME OF ALL THINGS GOOD, PLEASE USE SPELL-CHECK!

Either way, it's still a good story. Just some spelling errors that would make a computer not be able to read any of it. But a human can look at the context, so I can guess what you mean. But if your dictionary says eighter is a word, I think you have to shred it. Now.

~Amber, the one who is sick of bad spelling and offering to beta-read your fic!