Awesome job.

oh, too funny!
very good story!
kudos.

OMG I loved this story it was totally awesome. I cant wait to see what happens next. I love reading stories with these two as a couple. I hate author notes dont you I mean they always get the readers hopes up you know I mean the readers think its another chapter of the story but it turns out its a author note and it just gets our hopes up which sucks. Anyway like i said before i cant wait to see what happens next.

lol poor tortured lamb

PERFECT. very realistic. haha. i loved it. :)

oh, and it gets me thinking about his little tryst with madison...since he's sure he can't have veronica..why not hook up with a blonde ** in her acquaintence? and one that he knows she hates. haha

Whew... that was fun :)
Great job... perhaps a follow-up is in order?

That was way Hot! I hate Lamb!

This is really good. I love how you got into Lamb's mind and did this. Plus, you set up the pairing without messing up cannon.

SS4EVA

very sexy ...

Pure magic! I really think he really has that much contempt for V. He just hates the fact that Leo had her... LOL.

Have you seen the vid fics 'Close to You' and 'That Thing You Do'? Let me know if you wan't to see it. I'll send it your way.

I have to admit, I'm liking the Lamb/Veronica shippiness. This was especially well written.

Damn!! GREAT! Lol. I love Lamb, he can be so damn annoying. Very very well done. :D

Oh God, this ship is becoming less and less disturbing. It's like those many Buffy ships that were fun to toy with but were never gonna happen.

Any.Way, great story. A little short, but that could be so easily corrected :-)

thanks, deni :)

Veronica Mars is soon coming to Australia, so I'll be watching to see how each piece of the puzzle fits.