Yo!

Because I have alredy reviewed the first chapter of this story on AFFN I will just tell you that I like the second chapter alot... That is all. See ya!

Loved it. Please, please update. I'm pretty picky but your fanfic was just perfect, no grammer errors ( that I can see) and your sentences made sense. Please Update soon. >_

*deep thought* Exactly how old is Mokuba in this? In the manga he's about 5 yrs younger than Seto...He seems really young in this...How old are Joey and Co in this?

Ahh this story is soo good! Please write more because I want to know what happens!

** IT! don't leave like that! update soon please!

omg!
submit again! quickly !
good stuff.
xoxo

OMG! you updated! Yay!! I'm so happy, and it's so good. You mad Mokuba all cute and cuddly. I love it! Update soon.

This is SO great. I really hope you continue this, it's one of the best stories on that I've read in awhile. :)

I love this, it's great. ^_^ So funny, and excellently written. On to the next chapter then!

im a little confused as to where this story is going...

very cool story. I really want to find out what happens next.

Hm... interesting. I wanna read more of it, so ipdate soon!

Hmm...

I'm curious now. Very engaging plot-line; I've always been partial to such stories containing paradoxical elements in it. The characters are somewhat in character and somewhat out of character, not too glaring or obvious, which is a good thing, makes it harder for me to get turned off when reading such writings.

I'm definitely eager for the next installment but I'll wait until at least the fourth (I'm assuming that all four characters of whichever opposing side will have already make an appearance by then) chapter to get the real feel of it before I start to critisize it or complementing on a job well done.

I'm assuming the second installment will appear very much soon? ;)

I really like the start of this! It sounds so mysterious...I can't wait to see where you go with this one! I like the idea of 'balance'; sort of a 'Yin/Yang' premise, right? Great job so far!

Dunno where the story is going, but I want to see more. Aw, Yugi and Ryou crying... so unbelievable Jou could handle all that so suddenly. It's funny how much OOC he is, and I love that.