Hello!
I would just like to point out one small little detail...
In Redundancy, Lily says “You’ve asked me out every day since January 3rd in our fourth year,”and then James replies it was the 4th, and then Lily threatens that there will only be a 4th left of his pancreas if he doesnt stop avoiding her question...
While in Redundancy Revamped, Lily says “You’ve asked me out every day since January 5th in our fourth year,” etc.
(Im sure you understand where I am going with this...)
Anyways, I have always been a fan of your stories! Keep up the good work!

Even better than the all-dialogue one. Nicely done!

Wow. This was absolutely brilliant! I love it! You have a lot of talent for writing, great job! Bloody Brilliant!

xD

-rolls on the floor and dies laughing-

This is brilliant, just brilliant!!

I absolutely love this.
Like, really really love this.
Your style is so quirky and /fun/.
I kept laughing aloud while reading.
You're just that cool!
-hug-

Thanks for writing this.
Major uplifter on my day!
:D:D

Keep writing, ya hear?
X

Love,
Zay

I don't know how you do it, but this has to be one of the best fanfictions I have read so far. I love your dialogues and I think you have a talent on the funny department! I laughed really loudly at times and in doing so I made my sister pop her head into my room with both her eyebrows raised.
This is definitely a favourite of mine! Amazing job! I so love your style!
Lol! I'll stop now. I must sound mad!

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If you could see me right now, you'd see a very, very happy girl with the dopiest grin on her face, trying hard not to turn BRIGHT red and completely failing.

If you could get inside my head right now, you'd know I'm trying my best to come up with a fitting adjective I have not already used to review you with.

You would see I'm failing again. =)

Brilliant.

oh my gosh! that was great all over again. i like how you incorporate things around them also.. like the bum-scratching suit of armor and the jester painting, hehe. and, on a slighly different note, i love how your spelling and such is good...i hate when something like that gets in the way of a good fic. maybe just because im a grammar nerd... whatever. i only noticed one thing wrong in the whole thing..

"Lily watched the smooth movement of the butter knife and struggled to come up with a witty retort that was usually so quick on her tongue. She didn’t like this butter thing. She didn’t like it one wit."

i think you meant "bit" instead of "wit" ...that is all. i really loved this fic :D

I can write just one thing: "PARDON?" ;)
Just how did this fic end here? :)

This was so good, I like your sense of humor!

I noticed, that you didn't update nor did you write new fics for a LONG time.. I hope that changes... you are the one, who makes people laugh at ungodly hours, at odd places (I 'm currently on the train, and people in the compartment are eyeing me with concern..)and even if they are in really bad mood...

So PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give some sign of WRITING!

Your newest stalker and fangirl: HungarianWitch

Hahaha...great job! I loved this! It was brilliant! :]

good ol' redundany, can never go wrong
l-l-loved it by the way!

I love this! Can't decide which I like better, though ... "Redundancy" or "Redundancy Revamped"? They're both awesome. I loved "Redundancy" because I have a creepy love for all-dialogue fics, and the "what?"'s were more effective when they had that rushed feel that all-dialogue fics have.

However, "Redundancy Revamped" just has heaps of extra awesome stuff ... I can't choose.

Aw, that's cute.
But very amusing.
I like the way James twists things and distracts her.
Nice going Potter.

Ha!
A prose-version! I like it quite a lot.
Very cute. Very, very cute.

Okay, this is basically the new and improved better version of redundancy!