'It was the best kiss of her life. '

cute line! anda v exciting oneshot...i almost wish it had happened this way :)

WOW! Like totally amazing. I just loved where Michael went over to Sara and kissed her. (*sighs*) Absolutley beautiful

Oh god! It was beautiful!! I got little butterflys...

She had expected to get one of Michael’s Blue Steel gazes. What she had not expected was for Michael to stride across the room, take her face in his hands, and kiss her.

Bam, That's where the butterflys hit...lol I loved it!

Awsome little ficlet! I love the last thing Sara said: 'Tell me you’re a horrible person and I shouldn’t worry about you.' Awsome (again). Congrats on a wonderful job!

Cool Story.
Short but sweet, well done.

wow, i really ove it:) o, great mental pics with the devilish smile!! wow. great job!!

I know that you said that this was a one shot but i would love to read more. I really liked this part and know that other parts would be just as great.

Cute. "Blue Steel gazes" lol. Just a wonderful one-shot altogether!

Interesting plot you have here. More please.

Oh, good job! Continue!

I thought that it was great, especially towards the end, how cute that was. I really hope that you update it soon.

Thank You

This is a fabulous beginning--more please:):)

Great Job! Charaters are perfect! Hope you are going to add to this.

FRICK!! that was god

Wow this is really good so far! Please add more on soon, I will definitly read it if you do!