Wonderful story. I really knew how you manage to write so amazingly and so consistently.

It's so sweet and wistful and sad at the same time.

And I really like how it gave Aerith/Zack the nod it really deserved, and still maintained Aerith/Cloud at the same time.

Aerith/Cloud is my OTP, but her and Zack were so very sweet together in Crisis Core, and I'm a huge fan of Zack. :)

A truly inspiring example of a well-done short story. You effectively envelope the reader in your text, and even the pretense of this being based on another work falls away under your prose. Such a decisive clincher, it left me spinning even after I finished reading. I'm sad that I haven't seen more work of yours recently, but I am compelled to praise such a fabulous piece.

Wow! I read your other fic, Human Touch, and then checked out your userpage where I found this. I really love this story! I really enjoyed how you worked the parts from the game into it. You portray the characters so perfectly too. Keep up the great work! :)

Amazing. Simply Amazing. Masterfull writing, insanely well done character profiling. It's the kind of writing I'd expect from a published novelist. Which, you should certianly consider. Your ability to develop a character in just a chapter is amazing. I commend you, and this fanfiction. It's a shame more people haven't reviewed. You deserve a lot of praise for writing of this quality.

A great fic that utilizes some good material. Final Fantasy VII has got a lot of interesting holes to fill and you did a wonderful job of doing that. I really like character introspection and this gives a lot of depth to Aeris that is hard to find in many fics these days.

Definitely a good find.

Keep writing!
~Kyuu

A litte sad but nonetheless a beautiful story. I really enjoyed it, thank you. I just love how you depict Aeris, her life in Midgar and her relationships with her mom, Tseng and Zack. She seems so much more like a real person in your stories than the shallow saint you see in most fanfics. I wish I could write an Aeris like this!

Please keep up the great work!