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gambit
2009-01-21 . chapter 2
You start too many stories and abandon them -_- Also, as I mentioned earlier, get proofreaders. Seeing you continually make the same mistake ("finely" for "finally") in most of your stories gets annoying real fast. It's a shame since these are all minor errors only.
asdfasdfasdf
2008-06-21 . chapter 2
Very interesting. I'd like to see were this story goes.
AMWOOD co
2007-12-03 . chapter 2
This I like. It can be oh so amusing. I particularly like Twilight Existance way back when and this strikes a cord. I hope you continue this work.
Six-string Samurai
2007-10-08 . chapter 2
this one was pretty fun. hope to see an update in the future.
liteonit
2007-01-08 . chapter 2
ohh this story is really interseting i like the idea but i noticed u havnt updated in a really long time i hope u continue the story :(
j4 n3
2006-12-10 . chapter 2
the school part was good... lol
Sean Malloy-1
2006-11-08 . chapter 2
Interesting idea, please add more soon. When might you have the Tendos find out that the cursed form have minds of their own?
Ryu Vision
2006-11-07 . chapter 2
nice by the way... um when the next chapter... lol

Ryu_Vision
Bialaska
2006-02-16 . chapter 2
I love the idea. And I could just see Ranma/Ranko get torn in different directions when/if Ranko falls for a boy and Ranma falls for a girl. Hope there'll be an update soon. :D
Chikiko
2006-01-25 . chapter 2
I'm really liking this story, it's very interesting. i like the interaction between ranma and ranko. I cant wait to see what they do at school, and how they deal with their engagement to nabiki. hope to see more soon
Piemur1
2005-12-14 . chapter 2
Cool! Keep it up!
Sopchoppy
2005-12-05 . chapter 2
Interesting story so far. I hope you continue it.
A fan
2005-12-04 . chapter 2
I personaly would enjoy it if you continue the story. Its cute and could benifit from Ranma and ranko having either a brother sister feeling...or Ranko crushing on Ranma even vice versa.

I mean she knows him intimately. Couldnt you see her telling Nabiki "stay away from my man!"

Lol. I like it!
Bobboky
2005-11-30 . chapter 2
excellent
chill guy
2005-11-29 . chapter 2
Good start. I'm liking the concept of Ranma's two forms having their own minds. I'll look out for the next update.
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