oooo moree!

OOOOOOH. Can't wait to see the rest of this! The writing is pretty bland, but I want to know what happens next. Please get the rest of this up soon! Keep writing, pleeeze!

That was so good! It sounds so much like the real style of the Harry Potter books then most other things up here. Write the next part soon!

WRITE NEXT PART SOON!

This is a really good start. Reminded me very much of Ms. Rowlings writing style- could've sworn I was actually reading a real book. Please finish soon. :)

Interesting. Please write more soon.

Hurry up and finish it!

Wow. Well-written and interesting. Loved the way Snape was taken aback by Petunia's screaming, characterisation of him was very good. Keep at it, it's a good story.

I love it continue continue

good story

You're a good writer. Also, your style somehow reminds me of the original HP books more than anything else I've seen posted here. I loved the James Bond line.

Whoa. Very interesting beginning, your writing is polished and professional, and I can't wait to see where this is going...

That was amazingly well written

More more more please I love it!

*gasp* Someone's actually written a portrayal of Snape that's in character ... amazing! This is good, and quite amusing - as I said, Snape is well portrayed. Write more soon!