Shrieking frogs? Erm...
Well, anyway, really loved it, it made me laugh.
~Frogs

That part with the music-making is so funny... even though I do appreciate the seriousness of the story. So great.

I loved this! It was great. So funny with the analogy...

"Even...after I dumped her?" "It, remember?"

xD I loved that. (:

Amazing! Funny, but sad and insightful at the same time... and Ginny talking about Harry stalking made me laugh. A lot.
Nicely done!

:) At first I was going to leave you a review asking how one critiques nonsense and complimenting you on your cunning avoidance tactic, but then it turned serious and now I think I can look at it more seriously. I laughed. How could one not laugh at that much nonsense and thickheadedness? Particularly as a fellow writer, a lover of words and their subtle differences, someone aware of all the picturesque harlequins made fun of in the beginning? Ginny, then, seemed a tad out of character to me, but it fixed itself and now I'll give it to you. I don't know Ginny that well, anyway. It's a well-constructed piece, and it fits in well with all we know, which can be very difficult, particularly jumping in in the middle like that. Except, of course, Harry, Ron, and Hermione didn't get to leave peacefully at dawn, but wouldn't it have been nice? Overall, well done. I have some of your other works favorited to read later. I'll be doing that. Cheers! And I hope your roof-stalker and you worked things out as well. :)

AW That was amazingly cute and awsome! It fit well with the story and the whole thing was great. :)

nice

I love the screwball-y humor of this.

This is absolutely beautiful. It's an amazing mix of humor and sad realism. Your dialogue is wonderful. Really, I'm just in awe.

I remember reading this before, too. I was so amused how insistent Harry was about "music" and "music-making" and she's like wha?? Oh me... It was lovely. I guess he got a nice birthday present, though because of his stalking. LOL. Something to help him through the coming dark times. Hahaha.

Ginny. So blind sometimes!

Would you be exceptionally kind and consider writing a sequel to this, for when he DOES come back and she socks him one?

Aw! This was so sweet and funny! I just have to say that I've read a few of your stories including Redundancy and Potatoes and have loved them all! I love your casual comedy style. Keep up the awesome writing!

Lily Lorelei

Hmm... not your best writing, but I always laugh at the Harpy part. :)

Ever thought about chronicling Harry's attempts to write said book?

so funny ad really enjoyable to read

the whole incident in the beginning was really entertaining and i loved the way you wrote it, but that whole lake confrontation was kind of dragging and boring. the whole music analogy was confusing (in a bad way). oh well, it was cute.