aha! i must find this sequel...

TTFN

such bittersweet love D;

really emotional writing, fantastic

i don't know if I should hate Xelloss for doing it or love him, hmm...anyways! great chapter, in fact im going to give you a box of frosted flakes because they're great!

that is the sexiest rape I have ever seen...for serious.

lol, I wish I'd of thought of that for my story...m O.o

anyways, fantastic! this story is teh bomb

omg, this is so good! and I am so glad I found a Xel/Lina story that is complete

Xelina forever

this is getting exciting...

though reading it puts a strain on my eyes 'coz all the lines are clumped together...

but I've read every word - it shows how good your story is! continue this one!

I LOVE THIS STORY, LINA KICKS ASS AS A MAZUKO, ehehehee! Please next chapter, never stop ' Xellos: "god was the story that good?"

Rina-chan: "shut-up Xellos!"

Xellos: "Make me"

Rina-chan: "Miss Zelas!"

Xellos: "HEY, I DID'NT DO ANYTHING!, IT WAS HER" starts yelling back and forth at each other. Zelas Sweatdrops.

That was really good only thing was it was to short.

More please!

NANI? That's where you're leaving off? YOU'VE GOTTA WRITE A SEQUEL!

Ok, this just might be me, but had I been Lina I would have fought a lil more... And had he attacked me like that then claimed 'love' I would have punched him, and hated him. Not forgiven him. But then again I don't like men having control over me. I really think she shouldn't let him get away with pulling that shit. Have her punch him or something when he hurts her. The magical chains, and how he was acting, those contradict his words, even Lina would realize that. Actions speak louder then words, and his actions mostly read, he doesn't give a shit, he just claims love to keep control of her. Have her fight him verbally, cause love isn't what he's giving her... even if he is a Mazoku... I'm surprised at the turn of events with Gourry... I'm guessing this is finished (I'm gonna have to go find out). It was a good story, it's just I didn't like how she let him do bad stuff to her, and then didn't retalliate, giving up the minute he 'apologized'. *Blinks and blushes* Sorry I wrote so much, I really enjoyed your story, despite my bit**ing. *laughs* And thanks for reading my story 'A Chance to Change' (Ive added more chaps! YAY) Anyway I'll keep reading your work! - Lina

Really cool starting

It's great! I can't wait till Aftermath is out!

Where the hell is the rest?

Yet another good chapter. I still love Xelloss even though he is massivly evil.. I guess I have bad taste, ne? Though I did snicker when Zellas demoted him. I can't wait for the next chapter!