|Reviews for Sweet Redemption|
| SamGrace 2/17/06 . chapter 5
trop genail ta fanfiction!
c'est tres touchant la fin !
j'ai meme versé une petite larme !
| icklebitodd 11/30/05 . chapter 5
OH MY GOD i loved that sorry i haven't reviewed in a while but courseowrk and the fact you updated llike the speed of sound anyway iliked it especially the inner torment etc woo :P:)
| EmilyMayVTheCrazyDinosaurGirl 11/29/05 . chapter 5
| El Gringo Loco 11/29/05 . chapter 5
Aside from the obvious fact that Sara's mother should be in a California rather than a Nevada prison the story moves rather quickly and leaves many questions unanswered. Yo my mind it needs additional chapters or a sequel to address among other things.
Why did Sara decide to visit her mother after 20 years?
Murder is a state crime. So how did mother get from California prison, (Corona? Frontera?)to Nevada to begin with? (I can suggest a viable scenario if author is interested.)
Who arranged for her to be brought to the crime lab? Why? And how will Sara react to having been ambushed?
Lastly - I doubt Sara has ever heard her mother's side of the affair. And after two abortive visits, basically one sided confrontations,I think Sara owes her mother a listen.
| Senorita Stokes 11/28/05 . chapter 2
awesome story. i'll be waiting for the next chapter. this is really good. keep up the good work.
| charmed1818 11/28/05 . chapter 2
sounds great so far!Can't wait for more
| EmilyMayVTheCrazyDinosaurGirl 11/28/05 . chapter 2
| Moixx 11/28/05 . chapter 2
I actually love this story so much. This is going on the Favourite List. Update soon please!
| icklebitodd 11/28/05 . chapter 1
babes this is brilliant wondering if it is only gonna be a one parter its fantastic and would be brillainta s such however i'm curious as to how the meeting would go so maybe a sequel. this is brilliant writing babes well done :P:)
| EmilyMayVTheCrazyDinosaurGirl 11/28/05 . chapter 1
WOW, more? luv it