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| Harm Marie 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseVery good. |
| Darth-Taisha 2006-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell done! I am really enjoying this story. Thanks. |
| DiamondOfTheMoon 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuseGood story but is that the end |
| Treenahasthaal 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWhoa!! What a cliffie of an ending!! Nicely written and lovely and dark. |
| Nadreth 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseUm...so kill the Emperor...duh...okay ...at anyrate excellent just like the rest of your storys. |
| MsMoylan58 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseWonderful |
| derawr 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. |
| Lisel 2005-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm loving all of this - you tapped so well into Vader and Luke's personalities. It's completely believable and creditable. Your writing skills are also admirable. I'll be looking forward to your next update with growing anticipation. Sorry for being so formal - the informal translation and overall statement would be: your fic kicks ** and puts most to shame! P.S. Could you please have it so there's a potent happy ending to all of this? In the sense that the Emperor doesn't interfere as much and that Vader and Luke reach an understanding and bond a whole lot as father and son? Not very realistic of me, I know, but here's hopin' Anyway, great fic and please update soon! ^_^ |
| DarthGladiator45 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseobviously no happy ending here, unless Luke and Vader kill the emperor. |
| Uhm 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was very much what COULD have happened if Luke kept rationalizing 'because he's my father' as to following an unreconstructed Vader from the beginning of the trilogy. Whether Luke gets killed by Vader or kills Vader, it's too late for him. Luke already sacrificed those who cared for him'because he's my father! I felt VERY sorry for Han, Leia (good job in NOT having them be related) and the other Rebels for having put their trust in Luke! |
| Barbossa'sApples 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I definately liked it. |
| ILUVZIM 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a nice take on what would have happened to Luke if he'd known about his true father from the begining. I like it! |