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Cloner4000
2008-01-30 . chapter 1
Just there at the right time and right place..haha how lucky
Irenukka
2007-08-21 . chapter 2
I love both points of view, a pleasure to read :]
Raven the Ravenous
2007-07-23 . chapter 2
Nice. You really captured the private moment between them, with Zoro silently listening.
Raven the Ravenous
2007-07-23 . chapter 1
Yeah, Zoro snoozes a lot and he's learned to be alert because of it. I never thought that someone like you would write a fic about him eavesdropping on Luffy and Nami though? Btw, I love LxN! Future Pirate King and Queen, hehehe!
Red-Haired-Jack
2007-03-23 . chapter 2
Hehehe, you most likely forgot about this story by now but...LuNa forever!

Laters
Zephyire
2007-01-17 . chapter 1
Excellent idea! I’ve always wondered whether Zoro’s really asleep and what he knows about what goes on on the Going Merry. Just started writing as an author, and I’ve realized the power of review! : )
Kitomi
2006-03-10 . chapter 2
Cute:) Very sweet moment and Zorro sleeps on...or at least trys to.

Nice:) I didn't know you did One Piece you silly jolly Roger:) Keep this one up. I am interested to see what else happens in one night:)
Lady Buccaneer
2006-02-07 . chapter 2
Unique. That's one word to sum it all. I love this!

8.5/10

You've been added to the "Pirate King, Pirate Queen" C2 list! ;)
warprince2000
2006-01-20 . chapter 2
Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)
Shinku Naito
2006-01-08 . chapter 2
Ah, a fluffy moment on the Jolly Roger.
lainy
2006-01-07 . chapter 1
Love this story^.^ I hope you decide to continue it or do more L/N fanfiction in the future because your really good at it
The Kitty-kitty
2006-01-07 . chapter 2
Zoro, you sly dog.

I thought this was going to stay a one-shot? Did we have inspiration at three in the morning again? Or are you being a review hog? Save some for the rest of us!

I love Nami and Luffy's utter awkwardness ^^;;
Serch-villa
2006-01-06 . chapter 2
This was sweet. Though I think Luffy would be a little more cheery.
Angel of Atonement
2006-01-06 . chapter 2
Hmm...

I'm trying to decide whether or not the story is best with or without this chapter...

It's definitly good either way, but it's hard to tell which is best...

I'll say...without this chapter

BUT: I'm glad you wrote it. Well worth the wait.
Rio Grande
2006-01-06 . chapter 2
Aw, I liked that. I'm glad you decided to write a second chapter. The last one was so very vague. Luffy seemed a bit OOC but, then again, it was a special circumstance (I'm assuming some sort of Arlong guilt.)and it was all in good fun. Might you consider a sequel? You've been updating your fics like a madwoman lately, so hopefully you won't forget about your little one piece project because I really enjoy your stories, and I really enjoy L/N, so it's all perfect like.
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