i thoroughly enjoyed this story, it may have had its rough spots and odd twists. but hopefully more community efforts will continue to be written.
i do feel that the "T" rating held back some though.

ah, that makes sense. but the execution on the last chapter had thrown me for a loop.

what the hell? this chapter completely changes the story, from beginning to the end.

I believe that I started reading this story on January 18th, 2007. Why do I remember this date? Because it's what got my hooked on Kim Possible fan fiction. I read the whole story, ten chapters at the time, in the span of two days. From that point I waited for updates.

And so today, two years to the day that I started this story, I finished reading it. It just seems so fitting.

Overall, it was an amazing story. So full of action, drama, emotion, and everything else a person could ask for in a tale as epic as this. I would love to know what happens next, but I don't feel that a sequel could live up to the standard that this story set.

Sounds weird, but I clapped when I finished reading the last chapter. Good thing I was alone at the time, or else I probably wouldn't have done it.

So with all of this being said, I just want to say, great job everything. This is an instant KP classic.

Wow this story was great. Personally I would have liked to see Bortel suffer a bit more, but it was a good way to kill him. I'm really looking forward to any future stories from you guys.

Oh I've got another technical matter to point out. When Kim got shot by Wade and her skin got blasted off I'm fairly sure that it would have been a 4th degree burn rather than a 3rd cause a 4th degree has destroyed nerves and other nasty stuff.

I like the open-endedness of this, even if it was long overdue. A beta-reader wouldn't have gone amiss, but I'm still glad it's here.

i feel sorry for the poor victim of Zataran whose gonna write next chapter. :D
Man there is nearly no way team possible can win how can this story end realistic? well i have to read next chapter immeadiately

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Oh... Oh, it was beautiful. Really, truly, wonderful. It is, I think, now my favourite KP story. (I apologise if it was one of any of yours that was previously my favourite). It reminds me a lot of 'Gadget in Chains' (a Rescue Rangers story by Loneheart) with the themes of redemption and vengeance and being who you are and who others think you are and choosing the right path and not the easy one, even when it's killing you. Or even when it kills you. Always good themes, in my opinion. Glad nice people write stories about it for general consumption.

And you even succeeded in making me like Will Du. Which is quite a feat, really. Also, Shego's characterisation is spot-on, it's twisty and bizarre and self-justifying and very her. Especially rescuing Drakken at the end. Very cute. Very her. (It's really because of his dental plan. Honest.)

Dying to self, huh? I liked that. "Why do we put ourselves in danger every hour? I die daily" as St. Paul put it in 1 Corinthians. Because it's worth it to be a hero.

Guys, you rock. Wholeheartedly. Going on my favourites list, and one to be reread for a long time to come.

I do say that was quite an interesting ending. I thought it would turn out the way it would all sound, happy ending; however, you guys changed it like it will still be a hard life for them because of what happened to them. Again that was a pretty good ending. You guys should pat yourselfs at the back and say well doen guys. =)

AW why'd you kill Will? Oh well, I still loved the story!

It's kinda a bummer Du died but it was kinda cool having Oliver switch to BOLO programming

Lol @ the Bolo reference. I guess, conceptually, Oliver could be programmed with the AI of the first intelligent Bolos. Still, very cool. Ditto on the March of Cambreadth.

In conclusion, great conclusion.

finally! the awaited ending of this story. Extremely long but extremely good at the same time. It was sad to read that Du didn't make it. Yori and Du could have made a really good couple. Sad. And that bastard...I'm glad that that bastard is dead...he was so sick! Sigh...The future is sure dark and uncertain for our heroes.


Danny

Fitting ending, I would say.

The final fight was nicely choreographed. Most lived, yet some died.

I will say at firt I thought Will Du's death lasted a bit too long, but then he finally said words that Kim desperately needed to hear.

Kim definitley showed what it truly means to be a Hero, and Ron will always be there to help her when she falters... even if he doesn't have his MMP. Speaking of which, for some reason I am reminded of a famous phrase (might not be exact, but here goes): If you Love something, let it go. If it returns, it is yours forever. Ron and MMP are synonymous with each other...

Nice to see a conclusion... Finally! (just joking)

Amazing. Absolutely amazing. It may have taken forever, but it was definitely worth the wait. I'm so happy to see this finish up.

The final fights between everyone involved, Bortel's plans; they were all handled so great. The ending for Will Du is a sad one indeed, but he got to go out as a hero, and with Yori's devotion.

I'm really curious about Burn. He was shot, but it was never said if he actually died or not. I suppose we could draw our own conclusions, but I was just curious about it.

As far as Ron and Kim go, I love how in character here they were kept. Not only were their flaws shown, but the real reason we love Kim and Ron was shown too; from Ron's sacrifice of the MMP to go after Kim, to Kim's wondering about the chance to change everyone into "good" people... it was all addressed, and I'm quite satisfied with how it wrapped up.

I'm also glad that our Dr. Mrs. Possible, and Ron's mom, along with Dr. Director, and what not didn't have to succumb to Bortel's horrible "hentai" attitude. A shame about Vivian though. That scene, however, did uh.. get pictured fairly nicely in my mind, haha.

Anyway, it was all just too fantastic for words, and I'm happy this story came back. Seeing an epilogue on this.. you know, a future thing? That'd be awesome, but I suppose since it's a group effort, it'd be near impossible. Oh well, can't blame a guy for hoping!