wow!
I was getting so into this story and then it just stopped lol
I love the Kraine pairing {raine is my favorite character}
I really hope you update soon
Your style of writing is very nice

dont wory am reding your lovy story i cnt wait till next chapter.

Bleh, I'm readin' update soon XD I just want more zelloyd XD

I like this story. It seems like you know what you're doing when you're writing, and you keep all of the characters in character. I really like where this is going. Plus, I'm a sucker for Kraine fics. ^_^

Great Belin! There are others that share my plight! XD Of lesser reviews for a good story. Or, so I've been told about my stories. I've found the pairings quite intriguing. :D Never seen a Kraine AND Zelloyd in the same fanfic. Makes me wonder if Kratos would approve...
*snickers*
Anyways...>_>
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Random hobo: Don't listen to her! She has shifty eyes!
No I don't! _> T_T WHY WON'T YOU PEOPLE BELIEVE ME?!?
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I'm sorry. I really just positively had to let this out. More to come! :D

I think its great Mefs' Very...uh...is the word Artistic? Lots of Detail too,Nice ways to introdduce chars...Nice Smart words used... damn you, :P
Best Kraine I ever read-Only Kraine I've ever Read... O.O;
Well anyways, Rems' demands you update...soon please, dont make me ramble mindless again XD You know i can do that, just to say, this story deserves way more than two reveiws, really it does :3

See ya

Remedy

Please continue! The first paragraph was what really got me into it. So lusciously descriptive with a tang of artistic flair. Very nice. Keep writing!

Because the summary made it sound so damn intresting I read it, Plus the Zelloydness will be along soon...XD
Nice going so far but If you make it too much kraine fullfieness you'll have to have some good Zelloyd Fluffiness...XD
Damn You Mefs' I read it, heres my reveiw and I cant believe that I'm hopefully waiting for an update...XD
Only because of teh Zelloydness, 'Cause you'll never Revert meh, *Kranna fan*
I got a Fanfic dare for you now...I think XD

Okies, Okies Remedy has gotta stop ranting XD

Updaty soon Mefs',

Remedy