Very nice work! I love Daisuke in this, he's a very deep character, and you did a good job of portraying it. Down with Daisuke bashing! Thank you!

This was a bittersweet story, you write Davis really well, I'm jealous. Great story I loved it.

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it sucked so bad it seemed like it sucked more then anything rewrite the chapter all of it go ahead do it right now when you read this thats how much it sucked

I'm completely in tears here. Wow. One of the most impressive things about this fic (apart from how emotionally moving it was, which I'm sure you've gotten a ton of comments on by now) was how you managed to make Davis act and think so realistically for a character his age. That's gotta be hard to do. I also liked how you incorporated the whole "noodle cart" thing from the show into the story and gave him a motivation for it.

awesome story, one of the best that I've ever read

That was one of the best digimon stories i've ever seen. It was so good it made me cry, I just felt the tears come and I didn't notice I was so sad till the tears lol.
This is amazing,just amazing.

I like this fanfic very much. I've never been a fan of Davis bashing, so you don't need to worry about me flaming you.

Thanks. It helped me...

*shivers down my spine* I love this!! it accually made me cry!! This is so cool! it's so really AWSOME!

chidisima historia, en serio, me ha gustado mucho y me encantarón todas las comparaciones, que simples expresaban de manera real el río de emociones que sopesaban por su cabeza... además de ponerle algo de humor al asunto.

i liked it. it was so sad. poor davish.

Man, i can;t believe i didn;t come back to this till now... heh, congrats, you're inspring me to actuall go back and finish M- oh dear, i'm plugging myself again, aren't I?

LOVE it. 10/10

This was one of the saddess stories I've ever read. Daisuke was really in charecter. Trying to be strong for otherrs, even if he can't be strong for himself. Everyone else was to. The way Daisuke talked and thought seemed alot like Daisuke, I think. Please write more good stories like this!

I honestly began crying in this fic. I swear. I love this fic, and I was seriously shocked when I found out that his mom had actually, already died. And Davis's answers to Ken were haunting. Good job.