Reviews for Demon's Dawning

Lord of the Pit 2005-06-08 ch 2,	abusethis needs work in my mind. it is okay, but not really attracktive to my eyes for wanting to read more of it.
Silver Phoenix 2003-09-11 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is one of the best story I've read on the Internet the only one's that can at all match it are your other's you are a very talented author and I can't wait to read the next chapter
dogbertcarroll 2003-09-11 ch 2,	abuseHey, You promised to finish this chapter! It's been a couple of years already. How abought an update?
dogbertcarroll 2003-09-11 ch 1,	abuseIt caught my attention!