great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Ya should include others like he gets some help from ghost (namely Dani, Clockwork, & Wulf) and meet some enemies like Skulker, Walker, Technus, Box Ghost, Johnny 13, Ember, Desiree, & Nocturne.

They could get to where he is through the portal. Dani could travel with him. Clockwork would give advice everynow and then and Wulf would help every now in then. The enemies could be bosses or some could help him.

the only problem is your spelling. Otherwise it was really good!

hey its a me... not mario... have to be quick here but this is cool. thats a new idea i haven't heard of before... dp and zelda... I like it... well cant wait for next one! bye bye!!

Happy f-13 to you too! This was great, hope to see the next chater!

Enturned the kitchen? Honey from the cubbured? Spell check isn't enough, and more often than not it's stupid and screws up the story. I actually don't use spellcheck. Instead, I simply proofread. Spellcheck will not notice misused homophones, or other such things.
On a different note, honey in tea? Never heard of that one before. Then again, I don't usually drink tea, so I wouldn't know. Nor do I drink coffee. I drink hot cocoa. Hm, honey in hot cocoa? Must try that. First I need honey.
Okay... Time for a lesson on descriptions! This is how you wrote the part sentence describing Danny's shield:
"It was royal blue with a picture of those same three golden triangles that was on Princess Zelda's dress. It had a very beautiful red gewl right in the center of it that looked like glitter was inside of it when the sun hit it with it's rays. She turned the shield over to show two leather straps that were there for when you were holding it to protect yourself. But right down in the very low right hand side of the shield, was what looked like letters carved into it. It was very small, but it read “Daniel Fenton” in very fancy hand writing."
Not too bad, but not the best that could be done. You use the word 'it' too much, and describe with the most basic adjectives, and leave it at that. No. Your goal is to paint as vivid a picture as possible in the reader's mind, and to do THAT, you need to use both adjectives and adverbs, or even very specific and descriptive nouns and verbs.
Okay, here is something that I would write:
"The wooden shield was royal blue in color, decorated with three golden triangles reminiscent of Princess Zelda's dress. It was centered with an elegant scarlet gem which sparkled beautifully when graced by sunlight. The back bore two leather straps as a grip, and the engraved name of 'Daniel Fenton' in elaborate cursive to the lower ."
Yeah, I tend to go overboard on my descriptions. I know. I probably just made you feel really bad. Sorry. It's all a matter of using descriptive verbs and nouns, along with creative adjectives. And prepositional phrases! I think I used six in that paragraph, and at least one in every sentence.
Okay, I've probably tortured you enough with this. Happy Friday 13th. I'm waiting for the stroke of irony for '13' to be shown tonight... And then I'll watch the new DP episode. I can't believe it's Friday already...
-E.P.

Is Danny going to have his Ghost Powers?

Ok, when I saw there were no more chapters left, I screamed. Translation: Keep it up! I love it!(Mind you I've never played Links Awakening...)

thats really cool! oh and not to be mean but i think you should use spell check. well hope you update soon.

Oh, i should kill you for doing a crossover like this... except that it's good, so i can do no such thing. truely, there are some things that Danny Phantom wasnt meant to cross with, and i thought this was one of them until now... as long as Danny gets some sword fighting in the mix and there are GORONS!! GORONS RULE!!

Heh, mild annoyance from the spelling mistakes, but I must say... I particularly loved your rendition of the word 'towards' as 'twords'. It really should be spelled that way, you know.
Oddly enough, the Triforce is just a triangle with all three of its midsegents drawn in. Heh, I learned that in geometry, and I've been dying to say that to someone. Insidentally, Zelda is short for Griselda and Link is short for Lincoln. Yeah, I get bored really easily, and browse through random things... Such as dictionaries and baby name books. And also, on the more Danny Phantom-ish note, Vladimir means 'powerful prince'... I should prob'ly stop now, heh?
Zelda slapped Danny? Ouch. Poor Danny.
Okay, randomy chapter notes are done with. Indentations do not show up easily on the internet. Website-stuff is generally made with all sorts of fancy codes, like HTML and CSS, and other things like that. You need a special code to do that, and you can't insert that here. Bummer, eh? But don't bother with indentations; waste of time as far as that sorta thing goes.
Anyway, chapter was fine-fine and well enough as it was, as you said, fitting in nicely with the plot. Fitting in nicely with the plot is good. Anyway, let's see more!
-E.P.

HI! I am still sick and I saw this so I decided to review, but I was stupid and thought I'd be the first person to review, but I wasn't because I forgot to check when you put this up and now I realize that it wasn't... *INHALES* Well, I wanted to say O and I started laughing earlier when I read the PECULIAR room numbers (357, 359 o-O) ^-^ Well, I am going to go ahead and wait for the next chapter and however long it will take you, I will be waiting behind you...

With a pitchfork...

Jabbing you to hurry...

No I kid, but seriously, hurry. I know how school is tiring and arduous and protracted and I could go on forever naming synonyms but I won't.

And I'm gonna retype chapter 31 since It got deleted off my old laptop. rtyl! (Review to you later)

Yes! I like this! I shall put it on my stories alert list! Keep updating its great so far!
-BlackDecember-

it is spelt cruise. great so far

Dorr?!?!?!? Cruz?!?!?!? ARGH!

Cliffhangers are good! I love cliffhangers! Yay cliffhangers!
Okay, a few suggestions... 'birthday' isn't nessecarily capitalized and by 'cruz' you mean 'cruise'. I should really stop bothering so much about spelling... Oh well.
Anyway, this is intersting. I kind of suck at all forms of the Legend of Zelda. I beat the Windwaker... once... but it's supposed to be the easiest game, so I don't think it's that much of an accomplishment, to be honest... *whistles* Off track, okay...
So, anyway, if it were me, I'd have named Sam's uncle Lincoln, because I'm pretty sure that's what Link is short for. Heheh, and he's named after a president!
Anyway, nothing else to say, so... good story, and keep it up!
-E.P.