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nightelf37
2009-12-22 . chapter 10
Hmm... May I add a character in as well? If you're still at it, that is.

Dino: Sauropelta

Gender: Male

Name: Reckor

Color Scheme: Purple

Power-ups: Earth-based Battle Chips, Mole Attack (dig underground in a spin, preferably obtaining 'temporary armor' beforehand, then emerge from underneath the enemy, striking it)

Personality: no qualms between Leaf-Eater generation or Sharptooth generation and treats them all the same

Human: Maxwell

Gender: Male

Appearance: Brendan from Pokémon Ruby (color scheme of purple)

Personality: Calm and peaceful, skillful martial artist, tone of a surfer dude
nightelf37
2009-12-21 . chapter 9
*Sniff* I'd never thought I'd read something like this? The story is so awesome. But up 'til now, from '05 you only have 10 chapters?! *sniff* *sniff*
NCISgirl2
2009-04-23 . chapter 10
Name:Patty
gender:Girl
best friend:Ducky
kind:Cubtail
note:She is the daughter of mr.Cubtail

name:skeerch
gender:Girl
kind:Fast bitter
look:Pink skin darker pink strips dark pink eyes
note:She is non of red claw high men.
Dunedain ranger of the north
2009-04-05 . chapter 10
Hey! Are you still doing that Adding in Characters thing? Because I have two for you: One Dino and One human!

Dinosaur: Anklyosaur

Gender: Male

Name: Braun

Appearance: Brown red on top, tan on chin belly and underside of tail, only PET known to walk on four feet (meaning its a very old one, has been updated over years), has red leather shoulder pads and wears a small helmet that fits on his head. On his back is a metal crest with the letter B on it.

Powerups: Iron club tail, Swift charge, Earthshake stomp, and Rockslide (Makes a pile of multiple sized boulders go flying into virus')

Traits: Mysterious, talks only when he feels like it, loyal to friends and is willing to die than fail the Battle Net.

human: Joshua

Gender: Male (Duh!)

Appearance: Short dark brown hair, slightly tanned skin, hazel eyes, broad chin, slight goatee, 5.10 and slight build.

Clothing: Black sunglasses, Dark blue sleeveless shirt, Black leather vest, Dark grey windbreaker pants and a pair off black sneakers.

Traits: Mysterious (same as Braun), Shows up when least expected, Loyal to friends and will do everything in his power to destroy the HTP, and talks with a slight southern accent.

Well I hope you are still doing this thing so here are two characters for yah! Like this story by the way!-Dune
Seth Graystone
2008-11-05 . chapter 5
If you need another evil character, I've got one for you!

Name: Neon

Age: 16

NetNavi: Ruby(Or, as he calsl her, his "Voice of Reason".)

Appearance: Black hair that ends at his ears and with a spike of hair covering his left eye. His left eye has a scar across it from an accident when he was youn, and he primarily wears a navy blue sweatshirt, a black sleeveless shirt, and blue jeans.

NetNavi's Appearance: Ruby retains the same colored skin as in the series, with long legs, short arms, and wearing pink armor like the other NetNavis.

Bio: Neon is a clumsy kid that admires the Meat-Eaters because of their strength, and believes that all Plant-Eaters are wimps. He is disloyal to HTTP, and wants to steal Rex to turn him into his own NetNavi. He is an exact contrast to Netra. Ruby tries to convince him to be good, but seven she couldn't turn Neon into a good guy. Despite this, he and Ruby are actaually friends.

Great story, by the way.
Dark Side of the World
2008-08-04 . chapter 10
Your the best LBT writer I know. If fact you inspired me to think of the idea of doing the fic we have. I hope I'll be as good as you. Great Chaper, really can't wait for the next one.

Later.
Rock Raider
2008-08-02 . chapter 10
Intense battle, sad ending to the chapter. About the only person I could consider who would be HAPPY that Littlefoot's mother's dead is... well, I think you know.

It's Grayscale.

I wouldn't be surprised if somewhere down the road she met up with Littlefoot & said how his "mother's" death was a GOOD thing because there's 1 less "Leaf-Eating Terror-monger" on the net. Can you imagine the fight it'd cause between them? Obviously, Littlefoot would be very hard-pressed against her. Also, I think I know of somebody Jason could relate to who could help him cope in an upcoming chapter. Shun, with or without FreezeMan.EXE. 'Course, he had a worse life & tragedy than Jason. He lost BOTH his parents in a plane crash, & all his other relatives didn't want him. But still, he knows the loss. Anyway, I wonder what'll happen to Chomper, since no doubt he might be included in this, due to his appearance in LBT2. Wonder what'll cause him to regress to a hatchling, giving him his LBT2 personality. Also, I bet Ozzy's & Strut's net ops will be either HTTP agents, or perhaps more likely, petty thieves, since all they cared about was stealing & eating eggs. I think I'll just leave that up to you. Hope there's no song numbers. As enjoyable as they are to watch, reading them just make me go "oh god". Also, I keep thinking 1 good plot device would be Cera being tasked by Mallory's father to meet a net navi he was to trade battle chips with, that navi being NumberMan.EXE from ACDC. Since both Haruko & Higsby run battle chip shops, I'd imagine they might trade, since both their regions have battle chips the other doesn't. Just pitching an idea. Well, anyway, update soon.
Rallag too lazy to log in.
2008-08-02 . chapter 10
Yey! You've updated! Cheese for everyone!
MC CJ
2008-08-01 . chapter 10
Man this story rulz and I like how things are getting intresting here.
Rallag
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Sorry about this but I was kicked of the latop during my last reveiw, so I didnt get to finish my charator.

Gender: Male

Phsyical Aparrence: Red with a lighter red underbelly an a black stripe along his back.

Special Battle chips/Attacks/Moves: Camoflauge, LavaSniperBlast and backstab .
Rallag
2008-03-15 . chapter 9
Right a charachtor for ye:

Name:Jack

Class:Sharptooth virus.(Allosuaros)

Good Traits: Clever, witty, and good at everything sneaky.

Bad Trait: Often underestimates oppenents.

Bio: Commanded to infiltrate and Steal certain things. Commanded by who or whom ,none know.
Cylon One
2008-03-11 . chapter 2
This is proving to be lots better than I'd thought it'd be.
Cylon One
2008-03-10 . chapter 1
This has got to be the first universe that has caught my interest having anything to do with "Land Before Time" stuff.
I really think I'm going to like this one.
Rallag
2008-03-10 . chapter 4
This story is very intresting but Chomper could be includid as a virus, that would make things a little more intricate and intresting.
Daisy
2007-10-05 . chapter 1
sounds cool
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