Great work so far! Interesting characters and names. And don't worry about poems and riddles sounding cheesy; they're hard to write! Keep up the good writing.

WHAT?!

Only 17 reviews!? I can't believe it! This story is so well done, it's just unbelievable that you have so few reviews!!

I love the characters and it seems very Redwallish, for the most part, so congrats on that.

The hare accent is a tad awkward at times, but I don't think I could do any better so...

This one is DEFINITELY going on my favorite story list, good job!

I absoluteley love it!So well written!You updated!YAY!No one has been updating.I guess because it is the end of school.That would make sense.Anyways very very very very very very very very very very very very very very absoballuluteley wonderfully most excellent awesomely cool sweetly sweet- and so many others-story!I just love those phrases!Thanks for updating! ;) Made me MORE than happy! :) Thank you so much!You are awesome!SEIZE THE DAY!
Princess of Brooklyn
Kat Conlon

Hi!This is for all the chapters.My sister told me about this story.She told me she subbmitted a character.I read it and I like it.You have awesome story-writing skills.If it not too late I would like to submit two characters.

Name: Kate(Katrina)
Species: Squirrel
Good or Bad: Good
Personality:Cheerful,cheeky,easily gets mad,acrobatic,useful with bows and arrows-nothing else with weapons

Name: Emily
Species: Otter
Good or Bad: Good
Personality: Happy,cheeky,laughs easily,very patient,hardly ever mad,good with quater stave/javelin or sword/dirk

Both are female.They are the best of friends and therefore hardly ever separate.They are out of Dibbun years 5 seasons back.
You have permission to change things but please notify me if you do.
I really like your poems and songs from all the chapters.You have awesome talent with writing everything.Thank you for letting me waste your time!
`Princess of Brooklyn
Katrina Conlon

Egads! Finally! I am so happy. You were gone forever! THis is a good story, and it has all the right suspense. I want to know who was watching. Argh! THe suspense is killing me! I can't wait for my characters to be in. I have to go. My sister is waitning to get on. Update soon! I MUST know what happens! And I hope that my characters don't die!
Seize the Day!

i liked it keep going
character request
name, swiftfoot
hamster
both,good and bad
male

name, ashpaw
ferret
good or bad
male

again, love it. I don't have much ta say 'cept make more chaps!

I liked this chap alot! There isn't much else to say, except I can't wait for more!Cheers,
(the not as lazy as before)
Dornar

Nice story! I really enjoy your style of writing. I'll keep reading!

Can't log in. Just wanted to say, "Yay!" And I guess my characters will be in soon since Bren and Saril are coming back to the Abby. That makes me happy! Well, update soon, and don't wait as long, I was sad.
Seize the Day!

keep goin i have complete faith that this story will be great!

I am finally getting my lazy butt around to reviewing. I did read this earlier, I promise, but, I was babysitting. And, I'm a lazy bum-bum means butt in England, did you know that? So, I will wait not-so-patiently. Oh well. Um, I hope you don't update in the next three days, 'cause I'm going on a youth retreat and won't be here. Anyway, keep up the good work, update soon, and I can't wait to be in it. Plus, I like the marching song. You're doing well in that respect, poems and songs and such. Later!
Seize the Day!
PS:It's a little early, but Happy New Year!

Okay, I am this lazy. I haven't done this kinda 'non logged in' reveiw fer a month or two, but today I am really lazy! Anyways, the marching song was really good! Oh no...DARN YOU! ((sob)) Now its stuck in my head.
:P
Anyways, can't wait fer more! Oh, and that Hipdart rabbit feller, he's pretty cool, bit weird, but all the same so far a good character!
Cheers,
(The incredibly lazy)
Dornar

Not a bad start you have the meals down well. I still don't know if I would put this in my c2 group. Most of the war is at salamandstron but the main character is a redwaller.

Yay! I saw this, like, an hour ago, but the new chapter wasn't up. Argh!So, I like it, and I'm sorry if I messed up the plot. But, it makes me feel special to be in a story. Stupid,I know, I have no life. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter, and for me to be in it!(I am so self-centered!)
Later!Oh, I am in love with the hares, too!
Seize the Day!