Wow, that was amazing. That was absolutely beautiful. And Neil left Todd behind... Poor, poor boy.

Simply brilliant. I just loved it. It was magic, the words flowed perfectly, smoothly, magically. It was amazing.

That was good. I liked the part about the "pretty lies". Well put. I also liked the ending. Good job.

Couldn't believe that no one had reviewed this yet, it was such a great story. You managed to capture Todd's grief just right, as well as the idea that Neil had actually lost the will to live. It was quite a touching piece.

~Tyello