   zayra 2004-10-29 . chapter 2hahahahahahahaha can't (pant) stop (snicker) laughing TEehehe.
ahem...
(regains composure)
that was absolutely hilarious, great job on this chapter. |
 Spirit of the Dead 2004-07-25 . chapter 2interesting...i like it, please update soon. and uh who are the couples? but if you want it to be a surprise i don't mind, just please update soon. Ja ne
Death |
| krazy pandi 2003-08-20 . chapter 2 lol |
 SilverCaladan 2003-08-01 . chapter 2LOL!
oh, and did I mention,
LOL!
yea, you really should continue this i mean its been over a year and it has a really good storyline. |
| Cor-chan 2003-04-28 . chapter 2 Bwahahahahaha... more! |
| Tenshi-Kaikou 2003-04-18 . chapter 2 hey! this is really kewl!! When will we get to see trunks' quote? PlZ Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz update soon! |
| Shad 2003-01-10 . chapter 2 Two words
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
peace, |
| Saturn's Hikari (IM me) 2002-12-21 . chapter 2 gee, since you seem to have stopped with this could some one else take it over. I will if you'll let me. Unless you want to keep it. email me at ckdregan@earthlink.net |
| The Elemental 2002-07-31 . chapter 2 Oh! you wrote some more! I'm honestley keeping my eye out on this story. It's funny already, and has potential. (Don't you hate it when teschers use that word? It's still fun!) Please! Keep Writing!! |
| authoress 2002-06-16 . chapter 2 kewl! this is funny! write more! |
| Saturn's Hikari 2002-05-12 . chapter 2 COOL!!!! I love this! What happens next? How will the HP characters take this? any Romances? Write More SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNN! ^_~ |
| faeriesinger 2002-05-05 . chapter 2 hmmmmmmm.....more? please? pretty please? |
| Marai 2002-04-27 . chapter 2 Please finish it, Duo is soooooooooooooooo funny!!!!!!!!!!!! evil cliffhangers....... |
| Michelle 2002-04-23 . chapter 1 The characters are very expressive, and your wording is very descriptive. The rating should probably either be changed to PG-13, or the swearing, etc. should be taken out. Good idea for a story! |
| count nobbus 2002-04-21 . chapter 2 good story. written well too |
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