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Reviews For: Happy Endings

Talitha Koum 2006-07-09 ch 1,	abuseAH! I loved it! I know it was fluffy and I know you think it was overly so...but I'm a slave to the warm fuzzies and I think it's brilliant! I can die happy now. ^_^
Miss Megaboo 2006-04-17 ch 1,	abuseaw. Uber cute. I liked how you made Heero seem like a normal human being in this fic. Kinda outta character but it works for the story. PLEASE don't let it end like that! I wanna know what happens after that! I mean, what if something happens and Relena doesn't want to marry Heero?! Plot bunnies will charge at me with ideas and I won't be able to do anything about them! Tis a cliffy!
anonymous 2005-12-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww, man am I lovin' this! It cracked me up. Too, too good.
TEF 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI must say, the editing wasn't as bad as you seem to think (There are a lot worse, not to worry). ^_^ It was very, very very very, cute! I would have liked to seen deeper hidden feelings on the part of Herro, ya know, particular reasons as to why he wanted her to pick him over the others ^_~ But none the less very cute! Hope to read more from you!
Lady 2005-12-06 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is so cute. r u going to continue? i could totally see heero trying so hard for her.
Isis 01 2005-11-30 ch 1,	abuse“Your helmet got in the way.” hahaha my God, that phrase was like, the best thing I've read in months! Finally someone has the mind to actually make Heero say it out loud. But maybe it was just a matter of time. After all, the truth always finds its way ne? hehehe. Well anyways, as you might guess, I loved your story and how your portrayed Heero and Relena. Especially Heero; he wanted to help her and her cause, but I think that there was still a deeper reason hidden inside him. Like he was actually doing it because he wanted to marry her and he was using the situation as an excuse. Well, that's my perception anyway. Oh, and I know it's a one-shot, but couldn't you make a teeny, tiny little sequel? Just asking. Becuase it would be really great to see how everything ended up. But I'm just saying ok? Can't hurt to ask. Oh well, I'll stop bothering you with my senseless rants so you can continue making more wonderful stories (maybe that little sequel). Keep up the good work!
Shane 2005-11-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat start i love it already. But pleas tell me that you are not going to allow Relena to give all of that money to charity. I mean a large sum is alright but all. Part of the allure for me in most fics i read relating to the Peacecrafts, is their extreme wealth. I know it is materialistic but true. Yes she is rich without the inheritance but still ,et her use the money to start a comapny or something and have Heero run it . Or better yet have her run it as i always get the impression from fics and the like that while she likes being VFM that it is very burdomesome on her and i get that impression from your fic as well.But overall i like your start it is very interesting and a bit of a new concept for me from other fics i have read.
hieiashke 2005-11-29 ch 1,	abuseAhm, well, i didn't read all of it yet. but, it looked kinda interesting to me. is it gonna be continued? I hope so, coz i'm tired of reading HxR fics only to have them discontinued and leaving me hanging. A liitle waffiness isn't bad you know. But too much of it on Heero Yuy, well, it's a little bit, uhm, confusing.
Terra 2005-11-29 ch 1,	abuseThat was so sweet it almost made my teeth hurt. Very fluffy! Like...a Three Musketeer's Bar. And I LOVE chocolate. Good one-shot!
Stormhammer 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat concept! Great beginning! Please continue! This could certainly be a 10 on the fluffage scale! Even with Heero screwing up a few times!

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