I like the idea and plot, but your story, as far as ch-1 goes, lacks emotion. I simply dont feel the drama of it. Everything happens so quick that nothing seems impotant. Its as if all the characters are robots. You know, the old classic sci-fi kind, where their voice never changes in pitch or volume. I apologze for the negativity, but your writing just doesnt portray the emotion that should be felt when a child leaves his/her mother, knowing that he/she would never return. I hope you understand what im trying to say, and that you use my critisism to improve your writing. Your writing has great potential. I hope that you understantd, and use that potential to its fullist.

I like it so far. It seems to me ranko is being pushed hard by her mom in the romance department. These leads me to believe that she would cling all the more to her beliefs and views, and end up hooking up with a kunoichi. Only, it would be someone she would respect, and empathize with, one who has experiences of being outcast and different. That is why my vote is for Ranko/Anko.

Pair Ranko up with Itachi!

well, I liked the exams.

sasuke, he's an idiot, for succumbing to temptation during a test.

and getting naruto, ranko, and hinata on the same team is just pure genius.

I agree, Lawra. It's just a made up story. A pretty good one at that. Stop and think for a second. If some deranged man came along and changed your childs gender and sent him/her into another world, would you be upset? To me, that would severely ** off any one and deal the most damage to someone's heart!

As for the voting, I know I'm late, but hey! Lee is a good choice. I think Zab should die and the other should live. Neji needs a girl in his life. Maybe she can pull the stick out for him...lol!

Lawra, grow the hell up. This is a fanfiction if she wanted to Randa could make Orochimaru a pimp lord who wears a silver diaper on his transvestite head! That's what this whole site is about artistic freedom. Give her some freaking freedom.

And Randa I'd Like Zabuza to die but Haku survive, you could have Negi comfort her and she falls for him because of it. As for Lee... Have him trim his eyebrows, get a better outfit and haircut. Otherwise keep up the good work.

Ugh, it's overly simple and the only reason I read through it was because I was bored.

I mean within half a page of text you've used Kyuubi no kitsune as both a name and a title? Don't you know that it means nine tailed fox? What is she, Nine tailed fox a nine tailed fox?

Then why would Orochimaru go through the trouble of changing Ranko into a boy? Why send her away? Why not just kill her? He's a monster who slaughters people for fun, why would he go through such trouble for young child?

I'll pass on any further chapters unless you get more than a basic understanding of Ranma/Naruto and your skill at writing improves past a 6th grade level.

Though I will say thank you because you did happen to give me inspiration for a new fic.

Great Story

Great Chapter!!

Great Chapter

Nice fic so far.
1. Will the Nerima Wrecking Crew find out what happened to Ranma/Ranko? If yes go to question 2.
2. What will be their reactions be?

Not bad! Not bad!!

Naruto and Hinata Paired. YAY!

A really great story

Good story. Hope your writre more soon!

My Idea for the story is Ranko to use Umisenken and Yamasenken. Genma-chan is in hell and it's another world, so Ryu Kumon can't complain. They are also similar to ninja techniques the Kijin Raishu Dans - vacuum blades - are similar to Temari's Dai Kamatachi - wind blades.

Extra note: Oroike no Jutsu/Ninja Centerfold/Sexy no Jutsu is based on a Kitsune trait. Kitsune are known for turning into beautiful woman either to prank or seduce. Love Wikipedia.

Hope to see an update soon!