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Soccer-Bitch
2007-01-02
ch 13,
abuseawesome story! i loved it. i hope that there is a sequel to it. ^.^
buffgirl73
2006-07-02
ch 13,
abuseI loved this story, it made me smile and laugh out loud, your personification of the characters is excellent.
bluchampaegne
2006-04-05
ch 13,
abuseHello, love.. you've said that you're a sucker for these things.. so here you are... after all, i owe you one... good work on the story. I always appreciate a well written story by an author that cares about little grammatical things without losing the spontaneity of dialogue for one.. and Punctuation... I just love you for correct punctuation and everything... I loved the epilogue by the way... all in all much love..
Dybdahl
2005-12-22
ch 12,
abuseNo, I like Danny this way, he's a no bull type off guy and romantic one liners fall into the category of to much.

And I do love this story, if I din't I would have managed to review at least a few times between beginning and now, but I'm to cought up in the story to even think about it, just go stright to the next chapter button.
MrsGiovinazzo
2005-12-12
ch 13,
abuseWow! My name made it into the intro. I'm so flattered ... and so thankful for the booty. *dirty grin* A man that hot has gotta see repeated action over the course of 13 chapters. Thanks for the happy ending. Booty and men laboring away at domentic chores. Doesn't get any better than that. That was a great story with fun characters. I'm sad to see it end ... now get cranking on another. *laughs*
Remote Control Princess
2005-12-12
ch 13,
abuseNo! Its over?! No fair!
Loved it much though :D

Aiden is very awesome, love her much :D and so glad Nix is better and getting regular booty *mumbles something about 'lucky' and a rhyming word with 'hitch'*

Love the last scenes with the gals in Danny's apartment, and the guys in Nix's :D So cute! and Flack with a baby?! *swoons and giggles* Did he and Tegan get together? Maybe you can tell us in a sequel...? *hint hint*

Cant believe its over :( Becs x
Elainhe
2005-12-11
ch 13,
abuseWell done! To be able to write like that...:)

On your note at the end of ch. 12 - I agree. I don't see Danny 'spouting a lot of romantic mumbo jumbo to girls' either, not without a lot of convincing at least. That's part of why I love your fics so much, the CSI characters act the way I expect them to; and the female characters you create are believable and I can see them with him. I really liked the interaction between Mac and Danny too.
mestiza
2005-12-11
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed reading your fanfic. Couldn't stop reading it. So I was busy this Sunday afternoon ;). Nix is a great character and it's glad that Danny is finally happy. I like the ending. But I also loved the beginning :D
Axellia
2005-12-11
ch 13,
abuseFabulous story, hunni! Loved it all. Glad Danny is happy. I've really enjoyed reading it - just sad it's over!
jolein
2005-12-11
ch 12,
abuseFinally,lol

I really like your story(like you didn`t know that already,lol) and nix is a great character.
Elainhe
2005-12-07
ch 11,
abuseThis is beautiful story, well written, fast paced, interesting and 'in character'. Nix is probably your female character I have liked the most so far.

When I started reading the update tonight I was half asleep, but by the end I was wide awake! You're going to have to add more soon. I'm hooked now and I'd love to hear Danny 'start at the beginning'.

I'm normally too lazy to review or I feel there isn't much I could say that has not been said yet or that could be of any real help. But, with this one, I just have to say - well done!
MrsGiovinazzo
2005-12-05
ch 11,
abuseJust one question: If Nix is beaten up that badly, it's gonna be awhile before there's more booty, isn't it? Kidding. It's a great story and Nix is really interesting.
Remote Control Princess
2005-12-05
ch 11,
abuse*hums Sound of Music tune "Let's start at the ver beginning"* That happens alot :P

You know in depth how much I love this fic and it just keeps getting better!

Nix is so awesome. I can relate to her with her point of view about being a victim. In the sense that anything that happens was in the past, its the future that matters.

I like that she sees that Mac believes in him, even if Danny doesnt...still!

I like your take on Lindsey aswell. I havent met her yet (Damn you, England!) but I like that she's very protective so early in the game.

Tegan is too brilliant :D MUCH love for her. She has a very awesome sense of humour :D :D

Keep it comin'! Becs x
Remote Control Princess
2005-12-05
ch 10,
abuseDUDE! I've been away from my computer the whole weekend, so it WAS a welcome surprise to find all these chapters, but dude!!

Firstly, LOVE the Danny/Nix/Tegan/Flack/Stella/Frankie dinner date!! So cute and totally hilarious! I can imagine Stella's face when Frankie sat down! Bless

2nd: AIDEN! SO much love for you right about now! Aiden is totally my girl *nods* and it was very weird reading that chapter and trying to keep my DnA Shippy heart at bay :P But he and Nix are so cute!

3rd: Sonny Sassone...How do I hate thee? Let me count the ways...Nice interlude in the story though :)

4th: What's Niles' son called?! lol

5: HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO NIX?! Okay, So I know how you can, but duu-ude!! No fair! I knew something bad was going to happen when she didnt care that she forgot her gun, but i actually thought it was going to be the jerk of an ex she had in the first chapter. Boy, was I wrong!! I actually did the squeal that is usually reserved for the show, and shouted at my puter "No! Nix!!" I blame you for that...:P

PLEASE update soon!! Need to know how Nix is! This is like a mini-episode-arch. Like a million (well, 10) 'to be continued' episodes...God i hate those!!

Update soon! And thank you a million times over for this fic!! LOVING it way to much! Becs xx
MrsGiovinazzo
2005-12-04
ch 10,
abuseYou just had to work in that ringtone, didn't ya? It's a downer chapter, but with all the mention of Tanglewood in this story, it had to come into play at some point. Well done. Still loving the story. Keep it coming!
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