i am beginning to like most of your stories.

I have to admit though that some of the grammar mistakes get in my way in fully understanding your fic.

However, you get through those mistakes because of your ideas.

Sugoi, Eiji and Fuji are the best. I like the Dream Pair the most.

I am glad that you fully justified their pairing. Demo, it saddens me every time people tag Fuji as saddist. Huhu. But I let out a laugh at the start of your fic, when Eiji said, "Fuji.. even if you already know about this party and tried to distract me from going inside the house, you shouldn't make me walk 2 km."

I can also clearly imagine the reactions of the people invited in the birthday party particularly the kissing scene.

lol

rotflmao(roll on the floor laughing my ass off)

hahahahahahahaha

NYA!

HOI!

OI!

VERY FUNNY!

That was a good story. You had many creative and unique ideas. I like how players from other school were there. How did so many people fit into the house? Were all the schools there? I noticed there wasn't anyone from Yamabuki, Jrosei, Midoriyama, or Rokkaku.

It's unfair that Captain Tezuka can get his way with his punishments. I don't think he will abuse his power. I hope he doesn't punish his team at practice the next day.

You described Shishido's grudge and impatience well. Still, wouldn't Ohtori be able to calm him down?

I didn't know who some of the speakers were near the begining. I guess it was just to show that Kikumaru was just hearing random conversations.

Some of the orders were funny. I was laughing. Good job showing how Kikumaru is better than Mukahi: though he's a rival he doesn't want him to get hurt.

I also like how you had someone singing "Birthday" by Aozu. It fits the ocassion.

KAWAII! aw but I wish I could see Tezuka smile, rats. Fuji is cruel as usual :P well done and the grammar didn't suck that bad... (ok that didn't come out properly... o well... just know I didn't mean to offend you ;))

Kawaii! Love it!

eijiXfuji my favorite pot pairing.

Wha! i want to see tezuka Blush! Your stories are so good!

This was very amusing, if not a little hard to read. I loved it though.

*drools* I loved the last part! Anyways, isn't suki desu like a crush? Like watashi wa, anata ga suki desu? Iunno anyways, I loved this fanfic! Supa Yaoi Fan Girl on the loose anyways, yeah. Keep up the good work!

nya Ç_Ç.. i almost thought you would make fuji kiss somebody else XDD... it was soo beatifull...

got to go know

see ya

Yah, your right, very bad grammar, but I'll forgive that, since it's Eiji's birthday. Good work!

lol. I like how fuji picked on everyone. lol. a lot of grammar mistakes, but we all do that. Good Job!

Love it! _

HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY EIJI! ps thanx for doing a fic for eiji. on one else did :'(

e yay! another dream pair fic! hehe. i reall like the story. it seems really hetic and crazy...wish i was there. XD haha it would b really fun! haha.

anyway. i hope u write another fic with fujixeiji. hehe. XD.