Interesting. Catch ya on the flip side.

LOL I hope Leslie will be good for him, stay his friend. *g*

What did Lucas do that makes him think the Captain is gonna ask him to leave seaQuest? *curious*

What did he do? Will this Leslie oull him out of the rut? Only opsting more chapter will resove these questions..hint hint... :D

Hmm! Intriguing and very cute start! I do love his friend Leslie! Nice girl! ;P As for lucus... I am DYING to know what is wrong with him! Is he dying, sick, going crazy, going bankrupt? WHAT is it? I guess I'll just have to wait and see! Hopefully not too long though! ANYways! Awesome fic so far! Can't wait for more! Update soon!

Good chapter. Looking forward to the next update.

Love,

Lynn

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I like a writer who can get the whole point across in a sentence or phrase...it's much less tiring than these common, long-winded things that put too much emphasis on words and sarcasm. Subtly is underestimated by most fanfiction writers, like they worry that people wont get the point or find the joke etc. (i guess they want to be liked by as many as possible instead of being loved by the few who get what he/she is saying) Well my point is you're not one of those ones who has to say a lot to get the point across and it's greatly appreciated.

It would be good if you posted more often. Thank you.

I hope there is going to be more.

The beginning of this is great. It got me hook very quicky.

oh ilike the start of this!

Hope there's more to this. I'd like to know what happened.

Lynn

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