Wow, I think you wrote that great. :)

I really liked it. I think Luffy's character can always be a bit deeper than we see him at times. Great oneshot I liked it alot.

very deep

i wish it was longer and went further though :)

Awesome job !

damn! even though it's not their norm it's still so them!

Somehow, he always managed to keep his mental capacity at seventeen rather than seven in these situations.

and i just love that line!

That was wonderfully written. It really makes me wonder what went on all those years Nami had with Arlong. I loved how you kept Luffy perfectly in character! Same with Nami! It was great I hope you continue to write!

Mesmerizing and haunting yet beautiful.

I love it! Pleases pleases write more soon! Vary soon!

aw i thought it ws okey and really cute

I love this! I love this! Short and angsty, but you described everything very well. It's a wonder how marvellous you can write with just a few dialogues.

This was so cute! Yup, a different side to both of them, so cute! I'm adding it to my favs!

oh, I liked this one.. It shows a completely different side of the both of them. And i think that you managed to make luffy really sweet...

This is a cute story. Please make some more. Luffy and Nami forever.

That was so sad. It was really depressing to think of confident, in control Nami like that. Although I have to say the one thing I kept thinking as I read the story, practically from line one, was 'sequel, sequel, sequel...' I don't imagine that's what you have planned if this is a one shot, but it would be pretty satisfying after this small, angst filled taste of your perception of Nami and Luffy's relationship. As L/N supporter I salute you, great story. You're a really talented writer!

TTTT...sad. Really, I have very little to say, it's all just very...ad! Wah! But ish a good fanfic. Really, I liked it! Keep a-writing! .