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Katsumi009
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
What the hell? I spelled opera wrong. >Looks confused< Im a musician and a grammar freak. We don't spell words wrong.
Katsumi009
2008-08-31 . chapter 15
I LOVE! I hope Gavin gets back his memory. I also have to say that i agree with you on the opra music when it comes to writing sex scenes. It makes it easier. Im not sure if it's the raw passion that thrives in opra music or if its the words. It just has this..air to it. Grammar. Oh, God I agree. A man speaks grammar to me and my heart throbs. Anyways, I could blab all day on how I agree with you on most things that you say. But i'll shut up so you can continue to write. Update soon!
It's the voices' fault
2008-07-11 . chapter 15
*grins happily* You mentioned my story! Yay! I loved this chapter. Especially the part with Daisuke and Gavin...and the part when Takeshi's "big brother" shows up to haul Satoshi away. Can't wait for the next chappie!
Disco-Dancing on the Roof
2008-07-10 . chapter 15
This is so freaky - I was just re-reading this the other day! (Or was it a week ago? I dunno; I've got no sense of time.) See, I was bored, and having one of those hormonal angst-days, so I was searching for something funny... And I said to myself, I said, "Hey, why don't you go re-read USoA for the umpteenth time? You love that."

So I did. And I discovered that I still do.

You know you've written something great when it still holds up even years later. Feel proud. (Yes. That is an order. Feel. Proud.) :)

And yay for updates!
Lunacom
2008-07-09 . chapter 15
I missed this story and I never thought that With could say such cute things.
KireiRakuen
2008-07-09 . chapter 15
my head exploded when i got online and noticed the update alert. i was tempted to be late for work just to start reading it!

it's sweet and all that Satoshi wants to protect Takeshi, but he really should know better than to lie like that...

i've been waiting for some angry GavinxDai sex. i like how their relationship is changing.

i can't wait to see how Hachiro messes things up, as i'm sure he'll end up doing [totally by accident, of course...].

can't wait for more!
Shadow Vampiress
2008-07-08 . chapter 15
...I LOVE YOU! You are a goddess. Here I was bored out of my wits, and you update! And you also got me in the mood to work on Foreign Insanity. Hehe...Anywho, I adored this chapter! God, the almost-sex between Daisuke and Gavin in this chapter was better than anything they've done before. You know, I think I have two distinctive likes in fanfiction: rough, taunting sex, and bathroom scenes. Yeesh.

And schizo, you are the goddess of DNAngel lemons. Honestly, I haven't found anyone who can compare. Can't wait until the next chapter!
schizo and proud
2008-07-08 . chapter 14
Must review and get rid of nine...

Ah. That's feels better.

And DAMN, schizo, you took FOREVER to update with the 15th chapter. GOD!

Still a great writer though! (And still promoting the self-esteem!)

Cheers -YOU
The Night Owl is Addicted
2007-09-23 . chapter 14
DUDE!

i was like... when will their madness stop! but in a good way *sweatdrop* is that possible?

okay forget about that

what i mean is.. POOR POOR POOR Daisuke! and Gavin... like shit with their problems! But hey i love them together... when will they get this over with -sniff- i miss them getting it on... sigh..

hey how bout reminding Gavin about the cute little nickname that he gave Dai? i so miss it when Gav calls him that.. it SO cute!

and what happend to Gav's picture have you posted it yet? Damn scanners... used to have one but it was so hard to work on..

And won't Satoshi and Takeshi get caught in cam? was there really one in takeshi's room?

PLEAASE update soon... these guys are like so addicting...

and you're really getting better with your lemony scenes! kudos to you!
schizo and proud
2007-09-02 . chapter 12
Schizo!! You OCD freak! Why do you hate nine's so much?! Hmm??

You hate nine's so much you snapped and reviewed your story just to get rid of the nine in Ch 12...

You're a psycho, you know that schizo? Yes you are. Psycho.

Ah, but at least you got rid of the nine, right? Yeah...

You're a great writer!! (Gotta help the self esteem...)

Cheers! -YOU
Angel Born of Darkness
2007-08-28 . chapter 14
well thats an interestin phone call to recieve wonder how Keji'll respond to that
Shadow Vampiress
2007-08-26 . chapter 14
Schizo, do you love making me go nuts? I swear, when I read that last part between Gavin and Daisuke, and what Gavin said, I got a nosebleed from the imagery. I repeat what I said in my review to There's a Catch: You rule! I dub thee Schizo, Queen of the DNAngel Yaoi Fandom. Because you write the best DNAngel lemons ever! (I would say yaoi fandom period, but Ladya C. Maxine has you beat when it comes to Beyblade lemons...And HieiAijin1410 when it comes to Naruto and Inu lemons...Yes I have too much time on my hands.)

Anywho, totally can't wait til you update again. Adios!
Amadeus Johannes
2007-08-22 . chapter 14
Great chapter! Lemon is awsome! Umm...*thinks* I listen to opera and techno too! And I have Andrea Bocelli! Soo...yeah! >_
Disco-Dancing on the Roof
2007-08-18 . chapter 14
Huh. That is weird. Maybe someone at Fanfiction got bored and decided to mess with random people? Wouldn't put it past them, the cheeky bastards... *shakes fist*

I'm having an uninspired day today, though, and I can't think of anything else to say, so... I'm just gonna go ahead and send this. ^^;
ToastedBread
2007-08-18 . chapter 14
You tricked me! I truly throught that you were going to write an angry butt sex scene with daisuke and gavin. but, it was still an amazing chapter, even with your tricks and ploys! i still can't get over how freaking hot you make takeshi. SO CUTE THEY'RE HOT. I really hate "sexy" guys, but "cute" guys are hot. maybe that's why I don't like satoshi...sexy bastard.

anyway, AMAZING CHAPTER, you really made my perfect day even better. *smiles weakly *wipes up drool and starts pondering about the the things you have in store for us readers*
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