 dollface219 2009-10-05 . chapter 23I think this one was my favorite :) |
 Carmen Delta 2009-10-03 . chapter 1I just started my own 100 Theme Drabble (I just posted my chocolate haha) and found this one and thought I might read it, and:
Hahahahahahaha my gosh it made me laugh so hard. ESPECIALLY the ending (I love witty one-liners in drabbles and one shots - sometimes they even make up for whole-decent-length fanfics which are very good. )!
So, you know...Just saying I love it XD |
 MIS-MATCHED SOCKS 2009-07-09 . chapter 50oh no! Poor usagi. This is really good and i cant wait till your nect chapter. ;] |
 PassionateRose 2009-07-03 . chapter 50 PLEASE! PLEASE continue it! Don't leave it at chapter 50 cliffhanger :sobs:. Please finish it if only for your new reader/fan. |
 Elmo 2009-05-16 . chapter 50 ok, i love this story!! i think its one of the best ive ever read about sailor moon!
BUT
you cant leave me hanging like that! please! chapter 50?? NO!
LOL
but i always hated the rei and darien thing, it just ticked me off...
thanks for the story, i loved it and im chacking for updates!
Elmo |
 rebekahsc 2009-02-04 . chapter 44Definitely one of my favorites. |
 rebekahsc 2009-02-03 . chapter 29Totally cried. |
 LunaSphere 2008-10-04 . chapter 3beautifully written. |
 DaisyHazy 2008-07-06 . chapter 50Goodness! You couldn't have decided to fit in a short story into your drabbles a little earlier? And you've stopped writing this more than a /year/ ago!
Haha =} Anyhow, I hope you update soon. I love reading your drabbles |
 SolarWinds 2008-06-16 . chapter 50Rei and Mamoru? nah. i like Usagi and Mamoru better. whats going to happen if Usagi see them on a date? update real soon plz |
 Katie 2008-06-15 . chapter 50 I KNOW that you stopped writing this, like, a year and a half ago, but... IT IS SO AGGRAVATING that *THIS* is where you stopped writing! Things were going so well, so swimmingly, and then she gave him an opportunity to move forward... OMG! And then awful REI!
My favorite chapters were Ball of Yarn (with his sexy one line closing), Daily Planner (creepy-romantic stalker man), Button (with his stealthy attempt to console her) and PRESENT! Oh my gosh, I literally and heartily laughed out loud and had to read Present like three times. Loved it.
Once again: I love how you add another dimension to every single character interaction with hidden facial expressions, gestures, and unshared thoughts. I also really admire how you ever so slowly developed this obsessive compulsion to tease each other into full-blown unrequited love.
AND NOW HE'S CALLING REI! ARGH! So frustrating! So sad. There are so many tears left to wipe away before this story arc is complete!
I understand the daunting length of this drabble challenge. (Why would someone insist on one hundred stories? That's absurd.) And when I started I thought, "Ah, well, perhaps she completed her story in only fifty." So, if you ever decide to finish this, I will eagerly look forward to reading the rest of your tale.
Thank you so much for an enjoyable past few days reading your SM fics. |
 UsaMamo4eva 2008-05-25 . chapter 50Hi, I found your other stories, The PartTimer and My Fair Bunny, and in turn found this one, and I must say that I love all of them. I'm extremely disappointed to have reached here. And the dates above say you haven't update in almost 8 months. Have you given up on it? I sure hope not because I would love to continue reading the rest of them so please do update. Thank you for writing them! :D |
 lfleurdelys 2008-04-12 . chapter 50I don't know if you will continue those drabbles but I certainly hope so! I'm actually not a big fan of the SM first season, but your writing is enticing and beautiful! It was very entertaining and lovely to read about Usagi and Mamoru and how their relationship develops. I've read a couple of other drabbles from various authors but I think yours is definitely one of the best! Thank you for the lovely chapters! I hope you'll continue them! ^_^ |
 Ala Verity 2008-02-07 . chapter 4Hi! So I've arrived on the scene a few years too late, but the wonderful thing about writing is that no matter when you read it, it's timeless--and this set most definitely is! Description, if anything, seems to be your forte, particularly with sculpting out the finer details of the scene. I've only read through the first five so far (explained later!), but I really am enjoying what I read.
Normally, I would make a note of everything that might technically be perceived as a god-forsaken grammatical error, but since my work is screaming at me from the bottom of my pile of junk, I'll just let you know that the "mistakes" were minimal, things like (I think, I'm doing this off the top of my head) Ch.3 "should"-->"should have," Ch.4 "that something must be done for"-->"done," and "bracing herself for what may end up"-->"might." Ch.5's "her thought's weren't the most rational"-->"thoughts." And so on! Also, sentence length and construction created some issues when being read; for instance, "With only a minor wail about how unfair life was, she had to conserve her energy after all, she set off into the blowing snow" might be better read with a different placement of the commas. I noticed that these were written a while back, too, so it would probably be a pretty futile--and I'd like to think, overdone and pompous?--gesture. Still, maybe one point in general that I could comment on would be the use of punctuation to reflect speaking-style narratives and dialogues, since they seem to be lacking in certain places that would otherwise requing pausing in real-life speech. Long bits and the like. Just something that you might take to heart, whether this set of drabbles is retired or not!
On that note, I sincerely hope that, should the need to exercise intermittent or certain dormant writing abilities arise, you do return to this set. 50 is definitely an accomplishment beyond anything I've made so far--I've only read up until five (busy busy!), but I'll read up to about theme 20 or more soon! Oops--I guess the number seems almost arbitrary, but that's where I'm up to, since I was a little late in starting up on the drabbles/SM fanfiction scene (two years late? ^^). It would be wonderful to read your updates, and I'm sure you've grown since the almost-one year you last updated. If not, I still wish you good luck with all your writing endeavors!
Ala Verity |
 jessicam242 2008-02-07 . chapter 50these drabbles are so cute! they are really sweet and fit perfectly with the situation, they fit usagi and mamoru down to a tee |
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