sounds fun but i wanna see one fic that has inu/naru pairing screw the winny dead chick and her reincanation they just cause problems XP

one of the best crossovas eva!
hurry and update!

Hm, this fic has promise. I will be keeping an eye on it. And for future references, besides being grammatically incorrect, it is also a bit confusing. You shouldn't have more than one person talk in the same paragraph. Sure, it may end up with a ton of tiny paragraphs, but it is easier to read than a question and reply from someone else in the same sentence.

Another thing. I don't doubt naruto's awesome power, or itachis, even though the thought of a grossly uneven fight between the two seems odd, but I'd rather not see naruto have the Aokagami. A bloodline is tide tothe person's genetics/blood, thus why the sharingon can't copy haku's moves. It seems too over powered.

besides those two things, this story has some promise. I hope to see naruto learn some new tricks, while not forgetting his mischievous nature. Hope to see great things from this story

O_O

Cool. (Sorry, I don't know what else to say)

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! YOU MUST UPDATE! I WILL SURLY DIE IF YOU DON'T!

Good work! Continue please!

This is really good. I really like it. Please update it really soon. If you can that is. Please don't reply. It's not that I'm trying to be mean or rude or anything like that. It's just that I send a lot of reviews almost every day. And, well if every time I sent a review, if the person who wrote the fanfic that I was reviewing sent me a reply, I wouldn't have alot of time to read the fanfics. Sorry for making this review so long. Again, please do not reply. Thank you for your time.

nice hurry up and make a new chapter.

i like this fic i think u can take it pretty far good job on your other fics to keep up the good work XD

i'm tired, so ill get right to the point. WAKE UP DOOFUS AND WRITE PLZ.

This one was preety good

Hmm... Pretty good start! Make sure to update soon!

AWESOME!

ur 1 of my fav authors please hurry up with the next chapter