Good story so far and just delete all stupid reviews by canon-thumpers. You do not have to explain yourself on a multi-ship fanfiction site.

I actually agree with RonHermioneShipper - perfectly developed style, but wrong ship.

Seriously, don't you realize he/she was just trying to make sure you weren't dillusional? Not that you are... but I'm sure she didn't mean any harm by it. You didn't need to get so defensive!

I read your first review and I have to say, I'm sorry for their rudeness. I mean, yes, don't we all know by now that it's Ron/Hermione? Hasn't it already been rubbed in our faces too much? I just wish they'd let us write whatever kind of fanfiction we want. I'm glad you said that no one could change your views, and I laughed really hard when you described J.K. Rowling beating you senseless with a herring.

Wow, that was long and it was only about your author's note.

Anyway, I really like this chapter. Once again, they seem very in-character. And Molly Weasley is quite a push-over, I agree.

I sound like such an accomplished writer. Please. I hope you don't think I'm really this sophisticated. ;D

Update soon!
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I sure hope this is not a one-shot! (I bet it's not, your summary sort of described it as a chapter story).

Please continue! I LOVE Ron/Luna. You portray them so well.

How sweet!

I LOVE your style, and you captured the essence of Fred and George perfectly, but you got the ship all wrong. It's gonna be Ron with HERMIONE. I promise it will be. check out the anvil-sized hints there. but otherwise, good style.