that was another AMAZING story!^_^ dude never stop writing!

~Smells like Rain...

oh kick **!
awesome fic
very well written
I swear my heart was in my throat half the time
great job :)

okay, that was cool. again with the shower thing.

Wow, that was fabulous! Again! And I loved the last sentence! So true...
And if it's a series (even if completely unrelated), I'm impatiently waiting for another story! It cannot come too soon!