 grayscales 2007-11-14 . chapter 1Wow. WOW.
That gave me chills! And you said not to expect anything amazing. See, I would classify THAT as amazing. ^^
Wonderful.
Much Love,
Scales. |
 Anastasia Juliet Roman 2006-07-03 . chapter 1OMG.
This was so good. REALLY good. It made me sad, and happy. Gosh, you did really well on this, wonderful job! |
 iamhollywood 2006-01-03 . chapter 1more please :) |
 AmazinglyMe 2005-12-21 . chapter 1George x Alicia is mahvelous dahling, simply mahvelous. Er, yeah. But really, they're great.
Plus, I really like the idea of the colors, and the red and the blue. The way this is written is neat. Anyway, I can't wait to read some more of these.
~ AmazinglyMe |
 Gene Kelly 2005-12-20 . chapter 1wow.
one word.
brilliant. |
 CheRry'saMa 2005-12-14 . chapter 1 you should definetly write more often ^_^ i like how you wrote your story, it was beautiful! |
 Twisted Little Star 2005-12-04 . chapter 1brilliant story! I love GeorgeAlicia, they´re so perfect together. I look forward to reading more of your stories! |
 Sir Fuzzalot 2005-12-01 . chapter 1Hey there!! Always great to see another George/Alicia fanfictioin, even if it is short and sweet like a oneshot.
I do love oneshots. This one is an amazingly good one, i have you know. I wish to see more stories from you, so I think I'll read the next 'Colourful' ones. Are they all oneshots??
I shall go check, and read any of the other ones you have written/will write.
Good job!! Me likes. Ohoh before I forget, I want to say how I like the fact that you kept the names concealed throughout the whole story. Very cool.
I like your name!!
¿Sir Fuzzalot?
Sir Fuzzalot |
 Winnifred Dumbledore 2005-11-30 . chapter 1I liked this a lot, very poetic. I think the best thing you can do is to make separate stories out of your Colours; this way, more people will read it (fans of the different couples). Good luck! |
 Jagged Epiphany 2005-11-29 . chapter 1Oh my God.
Can I just say that and click submit? Probably not, huh? Well, I don't have to introduce myself, which will save some time. I'm always excited when there's a new G/A story up. It was no exception with yours. I knew it was going to be great right from the start! 'Drops of Jupiter' is one of my favourite songs too. Excellent choice!
It only got better from there. I was hooked right from the first line. It's not as easy to capture readers it may seem. You have a definite flair for writing. Your phrasing is particularly poignant, the imagery is beautifully effective, and the emotions are portrayed perfectly. 10 out of 10, my dear.
And you're only sixteen! I wish I could write like you when I was sixteen. I'd be a lot better than I am now, that's for sure. Thank for saying all of those lovely things about Old Faces in your review of the last chapter. I'm glad that I can now return the favour.
Realistically, since this one-shot covered so many years, it could have turned out really bad. You handled it exceptionally well.
I guess the only downside for you is that I'm now hooked on your writing. That means I'm going to hound you for more G/A! Your profile says you're planning a G/A reunion fic. You must do it! That's right, I'm not even going to bother asking nicely. More!
~J.E. (Alicia to you, though)
P.S. About your end author's note - personally, I would change the character category with every installment. You wouldn't people to miss out on their fave pairings. Also, I'm already a proud member of Chase Me Down! |
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