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Reviews for: Colourful I: Red and Blue
grayscales
2007-11-14 . chapter 1
Wow. WOW.
That gave me chills! And you said not to expect anything amazing. See, I would classify THAT as amazing. ^^
Wonderful.

Much Love,
Scales.
Anastasia Juliet Roman
2006-07-03 . chapter 1
OMG.
This was so good. REALLY good. It made me sad, and happy. Gosh, you did really well on this, wonderful job!
iamhollywood
2006-01-03 . chapter 1
more please :)
AmazinglyMe
2005-12-21 . chapter 1
George x Alicia is mahvelous dahling, simply mahvelous. Er, yeah. But really, they're great.

Plus, I really like the idea of the colors, and the red and the blue. The way this is written is neat. Anyway, I can't wait to read some more of these.

~ AmazinglyMe
Gene Kelly
2005-12-20 . chapter 1
wow.
one word.
brilliant.
CheRry'saMa
2005-12-14 . chapter 1
you should definetly write more often ^_^ i like how you wrote your story, it was beautiful!
Twisted Little Star
2005-12-04 . chapter 1
brilliant story! I love GeorgeAlicia, they´re so perfect together. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
Sir Fuzzalot
2005-12-01 . chapter 1
Hey there!! Always great to see another George/Alicia fanfictioin, even if it is short and sweet like a oneshot.

I do love oneshots. This one is an amazingly good one, i have you know. I wish to see more stories from you, so I think I'll read the next 'Colourful' ones. Are they all oneshots??

I shall go check, and read any of the other ones you have written/will write.

Good job!! Me likes. Ohoh before I forget, I want to say how I like the fact that you kept the names concealed throughout the whole story. Very cool.

I like your name!!

¿Sir Fuzzalot?

Sir Fuzzalot
Winnifred Dumbledore
2005-11-30 . chapter 1
I liked this a lot, very poetic. I think the best thing you can do is to make separate stories out of your Colours; this way, more people will read it (fans of the different couples). Good luck!
Jagged Epiphany
2005-11-29 . chapter 1
Oh my God.

Can I just say that and click submit? Probably not, huh? Well, I don't have to introduce myself, which will save some time. I'm always excited when there's a new G/A story up. It was no exception with yours. I knew it was going to be great right from the start! 'Drops of Jupiter' is one of my favourite songs too. Excellent choice!
It only got better from there. I was hooked right from the first line. It's not as easy to capture readers it may seem. You have a definite flair for writing. Your phrasing is particularly poignant, the imagery is beautifully effective, and the emotions are portrayed perfectly. 10 out of 10, my dear.
And you're only sixteen! I wish I could write like you when I was sixteen. I'd be a lot better than I am now, that's for sure. Thank for saying all of those lovely things about Old Faces in your review of the last chapter. I'm glad that I can now return the favour.
Realistically, since this one-shot covered so many years, it could have turned out really bad. You handled it exceptionally well.
I guess the only downside for you is that I'm now hooked on your writing. That means I'm going to hound you for more G/A! Your profile says you're planning a G/A reunion fic. You must do it! That's right, I'm not even going to bother asking nicely. More!
~J.E. (Alicia to you, though)
P.S. About your end author's note - personally, I would change the character category with every installment. You wouldn't people to miss out on their fave pairings. Also, I'm already a proud member of Chase Me Down!
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