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| weighed and measured 2008-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseSoren and the subject of play is fascinating, really. He'd probably stare at the ball and wonder what the hell he was supposed to do with it. (I'm convinced Little!Ike attempted to teach Soren how to play, probably with amusing results. Hell, I'm convinced enough I have the half-written somewhere) I like this drabble, 'tis insightful, wistful and a little melancholy. And also, aww! Soren piled on by children is a wonderful idea~! His rage would be amusing. (There was a typo of "Griel" though, and the capitalization of "It" makes me think this is all really a subtle mention to Ike, because if all roads lead to Soren, then all of Soren's paths lead to Ike. Really, they do, it's canon.) |
| FlamingDoritos 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThat's not very nice...WHY DOES IT SUCK TO BE SOREN!?! ...oh, wait... |
| MilesTailsPrower-007 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseOh..! That was very nicely done. I like how it was put together without names, and yet it managed to well specify who was being talked about. Excellent use of vocabulary and character reactions. I like this. |
| The Shadowfox Mistress 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseHow cute Soren has to interact with the youngings. At least I think it's Soren. Pretty sure. Right? Right? You have a really good writing style that is fun to read. Good job. |
| none 2006-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseSounds like Soren to me |
| El Hustino 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHmm...interesting. Nice, short, and to the point, as well. I don't have much to comment on, but it would be rude of me not to review after reading like so many people do. I enjoyed it! ^^ |
| Midnight Promise 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuse*sighs* Who is the manin character? Lol, its probalby obvious but I am having a bad day so, eh. I liked it, very enjoyable to read. Very well written. Great job. InuNightWalker |
| Banana Rum 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm new to Fire Emblem, but not to reading and writing fan fiction. I like to think that I know when a story rocks or not. This one definitely does. I love the overall message that you got through, and the way that you wove both tone and dialogue into the prose so that the pacing was magnificent. There were some times where I got confused, like in the sentence: "The child gave him a pitiful look, and had it been Mist in his place, he was certain that the soft girl would forget her duties and go run with the children." It took me a while to realize that Soren was 'him'. I kept thinking you meant Mist in the LIITLE BOY'S place, and that the kid was 'him'. O_o But that could just be me and lack of decent reading skills. Excellent story, all told. :) Kalliel |
| Sallonic 2005-12-05 ch 1, | abuse... ¬_¬ Methinks it's Soren. I can't think of anyone else with an attitude like that, that would even bother standing next to a tree writing. Anyway, I loved it! |
| Sky-Pirate-Tat 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. You could have pulled this off as original fiction. One of your best Cunie-chan. I missed seeing your work. |
| ??? 2005-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm guessing that's Soren, right? |
| Ayumi187 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute! ^-^ I liked very much! Especially that last line there about not being It. *thumbs up* |
| The Karlminion 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseShe has returned. But... it makes no sense. I must play the game it comes from, I reckon. It's still good, yet... no sense. Too vague for me. Maybe not for others, but for me... too vague. -=this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off=- |
| baka_Schala_neko_chan 2005-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseim confuzzled. who is it!?! |