Aw! Come on! Please continue... I really really really (etc) like it!

Holy Moly... For lack of better words. AMAZING!

I just have one thing to tell Katara... RUN! Run for your life. I don't care where just RUN! RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN RUN!

i like ur story so far and to me the marking of a hand or whatever remainded me of the ring. plzz write more

~6katara101~

VERY VERY GOOD!
GO GO GO!

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon i wanna know what happens!

dun dun dun!

Please continue, but this sounds ... hm UPdate soon!

Interesting. I'm not sure how I feel about the whole Zuko/Katara paring, but I'd still like 2 c what happens w/ this story. Hope u update soon!

WOW how did you think this up.

O...can katara fire bend? If so that means that if she doesn't learn to control it, it may kill her. then zuko comes in and teaches her and they fall in love. but that is what i think might happen! please continue

Hmm...interesting. Just use more spaces between sentences, like when someone else starts to speak. You should use a new paragraph. It's anoyying, I know, but it helps the readers. When you want to talk about a different location, just use line breaks. Otherwise, it sounds really good. Update soon. Cya